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"The Familiar"
Softly ever so Softly on hardened paws Nemesis follows the Red Apple scent of Her sword a peony pink pocket flushed velvet violent violet viola playing warm honey dripping from the pocket it buzzes as if with bees and it burns Softly ever so Softly on hardened paws Nemesis follows the shadow magnet dark wings beckoning and the Red Apple scent of Her sword Nemesis hungry to feel where Her shadow burns will swallow Her essence like speaking a 1000 beautiful mysterious words Rosicrucian from Her Vulgate now opened dropping pearls on the trail melting frost to quench his lupul diavolului thirst The King of the Forest scorned and tepidly scorched by hidden eyes watching absolutions mistaken misread wants Her to turn Her head wants to be heard that he will take Life over Dark Night into day escape in the light of Her shadow forever from The Forest of Hurt He watches and waits following no Angel la religieuse bleue en habit noir dropping pearls on the trail She’s melting frost to quench his thirst The Familiar bides his time with hungry soulful eyes relishing the feel of Her imprint in the wake of Once-was-Woman something invisible in the tidal pull of Her pierces his heart to bleed raw it nonchalantly ruffles his moon silver fur Softly ever so softly On hardened paws Nemesis follows the Red Apple scent of Her sword Two guarded Familiars. Black shadows - He too, follows, her peony pink pocket dripping frost melting pearls (LadyLabyrinth/2019)
“Lighthouse in the Woods"/Patrick Watson https://youtu.be/R23bifAbWWs
“And sometimes thro' the mirror blue The knights come riding two and two: She hath no loyal knight and true, The Lady of Shalott But in her web she still delights To weave the mirror's magic sights...”
"Heroes"/Peter Gabriel https://youtu.be/jn1UkLoK9ek
1. lupul diavolului/translator, Romanian 2. la religieuse bleue en habit noir/translator, French 3. Primary music - “Stretch Your Eyes” / Agnes Obel https://youtu.be/N0mV1raPQ3o 4. Lyrics, "Stretch Your Eyes"/Agnes Obel https://genius.com/Agnes-obel-stretch-your-eyes-lyrics

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Date: 11/4/2019 12:07:00 PM
WOW!!! What a poem. What a picture to go with it......
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/4/2019 4:04:00 PM
Paula, I must confess, I haven't read many other writers over the past two weeks while I've been obsessed with my own pursuits. I will go and have a read of your stories this morning. Absolutely stoked you loved my story. Wolves. Can't live with them, can't live without them. x
Date: 11/4/2019 7:27:00 AM
"Nemesis hungry to feel where Her shadow burns will swallow Her essence like speaking a 1000 beautiful mysterious words Rosicrucian from Her Vulgate now opened dropping pearls on the trail melting frost to quench his lupul diavolului thirst" Your mastery of myths, legends, and your own creative ways make this a poetic masterpiece Lady Labyrinth.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/4/2019 7:43:00 AM
Dear Madame Krutsinger, the poem is multi texured and words can be read many ways. I was inspired by Tennyson's Lady Shallot, quote above. Two shadows. Two wolves. One Silver, the other Black. Light and Dark. There are many wolves in Lost Lovers' Woods. Some are tethered and some are running amok. A work of pure fiction, which I may expand. Thank you for expressing your thoughts, so translucently :) x
Date: 11/4/2019 6:59:00 AM
I admit, I did not know what some words meant, but the feel of your write is much more than poetry, enchanting storyteller you are. Much enjoyed.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/4/2019 7:24:00 AM
Very kind of you to comment Casarah. Delighted you enjoyed the story. I always find, if you don't know what a word is or a phrase, it helps to (-) (-) google. :) I will make my way into your 'book' of poems, to read your stories soon. Thank you.Leanne
Date: 11/4/2019 5:05:00 AM
1000 beautiful mysterious words... pearls followed...your senses carry a deep classical feel
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Date: 11/4/2019 6:08:00 AM
https://youtu.be/0igYRShgNIQ
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/4/2019 5:57:00 AM
Thank you TS.

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