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The Falling Sunset

an alluring site the feeling of a flying kite the clouds are roaming the colours are forming red, blue, gold and turqouise a weather so moist setting clouds look like dark hills with high mountains lakes and valley mills. but a sudden red sandy desert with mud and black dirt now a navy majestic site oh! my covet to fly looks like a water holding boats with gold bue cover coats a never ending ocean.......... a dinless motion................. the sinking sunrays........... it's going.......... itz going.......... itz dark black itz gone!!! the falling sunset has finally FALLEN!!!!

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Date: 8/30/2008 12:21:00 AM
beautiful words
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