Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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The Falling Star - Answer Me

I am the falling star within your dream
and upon your beauty my lights will stream
glittering
fluttering
a thousand lamps falling and shimmering

Dream under the night sky firmament
all the bright stars are Heaven's ornaments
oh just dream, dear
with not a fear
I will hover close and kiss every tear

Sweet dreams, just drift and float quietly
beyond the stars dwells God's eternity
see it
feel it
oh God's paradise promised, moonlit

Birds twittering and lovely in trees
and upon your lips you whisper please
must stay
till day
will this sweet paradise be mine, I pray

Each night you can drift to heaven
Close your eyes and count to seven

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April 11, 2016

Poetry/Rhyme/The Falling Star - Answer Me
Copyright Protected, ID 16-776-979-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Inspiration - 
Stars Are Our Link To The Great Beyond; 
And God Himself,  written by Mystic Rose

For the contest, Answer Me
sponsor, Mystic Rose

Second Place

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Poet Destroyer A April 28, 2016 at 12:46 AM Broken, Congrats on your win in Mystic's contest. *LINDA* Constance La France April 28, 2016 at 7:37 AM Linda, thanks for the congrats ~|~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 22, 2016 at 4:58 AM Wonderful poetry n win Broken.. big congrats Constance La France April 24, 2016 at 10:12 PM upma thanks for the wonderful and congrats

Bl Devnath April 21, 2016 at 9:58 AM Congratulation my lovely friend on your beautiful win. Loved always, bl Constance La France April 24, 2016 at 10:11 PM bl thanks for the congratulations and the beautiful

Charlie Smith April 21, 2016 at 6:18 AM Congratulations B/W fine win... Constance La France April 24, 2016 at 10:10 PM Charlie thanks for the congrats

Bl Devnath April 15, 2016 at 2:52 PM Excellent poem bearing rhythm of true heart core. Good luck with 7+ my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Constance La France April 15, 2016 at 5:02 PM BL, thanks for the excellent and the love and the 7+ !

Walter T. Ashe April 12, 2016 at 12:57 PM 1...2...3...4...drifting to heaven with this heavenly write Broken Wings! "Heaven's ornaments"...love this line! Constance La France April 13, 2016 at 12:12 AM Walter, thanks for reading my poem and the heavenly, I like that particular line also ~

Charlie Smith April 11, 2016 at 8:28 PM Wonderful answer B/W. Best wishes for your success in the contest... Constance La France April 11, 2016 at 9:44 PM Charlie, thanks for visiting with the wonderful !

Daniel Turner April 11, 2016 at 8:04 PM Enjoyed your answer Constance. Good luck. Peace nice lady:) Constance La France April 11, 2016 at 9:45 PM Daniel, thanks so much for visiting my poem :)