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The Falling Snow

The vultures are circling Like they know The final act of the falling snow Time is waiting Can't you see The last breath for you and me We saw it coming But played the game The universal language of who’s to blame It’s gone now The snow has passed Time to change the name Two people on the road Different directions, but still the same Fate is cruel though Hits you on the blind Takes you straight back To that time The rehearsal of life The part you couldn’t see All comes together now Plain as plain can be For the final time You walk away Knowing that you can No words to hold now Just clear to understand The vultures are circling Now you know The final act of the falling snow.

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Date: 1/20/2025 12:26:00 PM
This is quite enthralling Paul, enjoyed
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/22/2025 6:42:00 AM
I was going to say aww but I imagine February will pep you up no problem lol
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Paul Bell
Date: 1/22/2025 6:29:00 AM
January blues. lol

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