The Fallen Star

No one knows where it happened 
and no one knows when or why,
the little, luminous silver star
came tumbling from the sky

Landing with a plunking sound
falling helplessly into the river,
this tiny piece of heaven on earth
became a gift without a giver

For it found itself upon the shore
along the waters of the stream,
and was discovered by a boy
who thought this was all a dream

Held within his small hand
the star pulsed with white light,
glowing with such brilliance
almost blocking out his sight

Kept secret and stashed away
where it could glow no more,
the star found itself among the dust
inside of an old wooden drawer

To him the star was a plaything 
to be treated like a favorite toy,
until one day it was forgotten 
by the man, no longer a little boy

Since no one ever told him
to wish upon a falling star,
and believe in the things unseen
his dreams never took him far

Had he been taught to wonder
just think what might have been,
still there is no way of changing 
what happened, now or then

The fallen star waits here still
in the drawer of his old nightstand, 
cornered there by a spider's web
to be found by a young dreamer's hand

And no one knows what happened 
and no one knows where or why,
to that little, luminous silver star
who came tumbling from the sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 3/15/2020 12:53:00 AM
A very thought provoking and enjoyable read
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/1/2021 10:49:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments Simon... I'm glad you enjoyed my poem... and please forgive my late reply, but I haven't been on Poetry Soup as much these days...
Date: 3/11/2020 1:30:00 PM
Kelly, John was right - this is a wistful write. A story filled with hopes tucked away - potential unknown. I hope the boy finds the star and passes it along. As the star waits to be rediscovered, I hope we all will go into that forgotten box of treasures and find a star to wish on in our lives. Lovely story poem. Congratulations on your HM.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/14/2021 3:45:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments on my poem, Sam... And, please forgive my late reply... I haven't been on Poetry Soup as often these days :)
Date: 3/11/2020 12:13:00 AM
Kelly, a charming and wistful write of youth, dreams, and wishes. Well done, and congrats on your win! ~ John
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/1/2021 5:15:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading John :)
Date: 4/18/2019 2:05:00 PM
Hello Kelly, twhen the boy found the star he shoud have made a ws=ish upon it. then his wish would have come true. have a nice day my friend,
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/20/2019 10:31:00 PM
Hello Darlene ... Thank you for your lovely comments on this poem ... Hope you have a great day too :)
Date: 3/18/2019 12:16:00 PM
How lovely, Kelly! I believe it is the duty of grownups to nurture the dreams of young ones, showing them that their dreams could come true were they to believe in themselves. Warm regards // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/18/2019 7:11:00 PM
Many thanks Paul, and yes I totally agree... I truly believe that children learn from the adults around them and it is up to us to lead by positive examples :)
Date: 3/13/2019 2:13:00 AM
Excellent poem. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/30/2019 7:48:00 PM
Many thanks Ravi :)
Date: 3/10/2019 12:05:00 AM
Wow what a heartwarming imaginative poem of the fallen stars on the wand of our littlehood dreams. A most wonderful poem. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again, Plz do comment or just read my newest poem too
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/30/2019 7:40:00 PM
Many thanks my friend ... I will be dropping by shortly to enjoy your latest works :)
Date: 3/4/2019 2:37:00 PM
very nice kelly ..love the story and so creatively portrayed in poetry
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/30/2019 7:28:00 PM
Many thanks ... I'm glad you enjoyed my poem Jim :)
Date: 3/3/2019 6:50:00 PM
Hi Kelly, this is such a wonderful write from your golden pen. Such a perfect write for us dreamers. Yif he had been taught to dream what wonders could have befallen him. I love the content. I found myself wishing he had taken the wish. This is such an excellent write Kelly. The imagery is so strong. A poor life waisted also. Maybe its magic is dead. A fave. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/21/2019 10:10:00 PM
Hello there... I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my poem Mike... Thank you for making this one a favorite :)
Date: 2/22/2019 1:25:00 PM
lustrous narration, kelly... so good to read you again.. wow and huggs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/21/2019 9:53:00 PM
Many thanks Nette ... Its good to see you here too ... Hugs :)
Date: 2/22/2019 1:45:00 AM
This such a beautiful perfect story, Kelly, with perfect flow.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/17/2019 10:10:00 PM
Many thanks my dear friend :)
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