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The Fallen Petals

In a quiet Zen garden the wind sweeps away the fallen petals from the cherry blossom In the mountain's shadow covered with snow white mountain peaks touch the sky under the morning sun Intertwining and resonating with each other the essence of beauty a beaten path of truth This life was not traditional though my mind longed to view such strange dreams I looked from the outside through a window painted by time I am a stranger in my being I am fickle and insane my soul has no fixed pattern I have no conformity I acquire my own
Written: January 24, 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bohack Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 4:41 PM
you have a rich, colorful mind ~ Amy
Crandall Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 8:58 PM
Beautiful poem Sotto. The first two verses are pretty pictures, and I especially like the third stanza. Your poems make me think.
Hind Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 12:02 PM
"I am a stranger in my being"-- that's me, too. What a creative way to express yourself. Beautiful work!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2023 at 12:53 PM
Enjoyed verse 1 and 2 <3
Goldsmith Avatar
January 27, 2023 at 12:27 PM
A lovely write/picture. I love the picture. Wish I had a copy. Have a blessed day/weekend..............
Sands Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 9:58 AM
Beautiful poem :)
Seeker Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 9:30 PM
A brilliant write, SO ~ an easy fav
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 7:25 PM
Oh, beautiful, every part of this intricate beauty. Sotto, now I finally know your name, Lasaad :) I am beyond blessed by this work of wonder. A FAVE, I so love the beautiful image you shared with this brilliant masterpiece as well.
Horsman Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 5:01 PM
Oh, this is so good, Lasaad, Could feel every word. Harry
Tor Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 1:47 PM
Lasaad wow. You put us in a surreal state with this one a favorite my friend..
Pandit Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 7:33 AM
This poem feels so deeply exploring one's life and being. Clever write, Lasaad.
Lawless Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 5:32 AM
that last stanza sums it up.....at least for me. Very interesting ..... I'm with Victor on that point. And when Andrea splits your arrow with a fave....
Buhagiar Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 9:41 PM
Interesting meditation.
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 7:58 PM
This is my one and only fave of the day. Love this!
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