The Fallen

Soft and tender
Blossoms fall-
Fulfilling life

beautynaturehaiku

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Matthew Anish

July 20, 2013 at 9:11 PM

Nice short work here - right to the point. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

Constance La France

May 3, 2013 at 7:39 AM

Ray, a lovely haiku you have penned and thanks for visiting my poetry, constance

Andrea Dietrich

April 25, 2013 at 5:25 PM

this is absolutely delightful, Ray. I just love symbolic haiku!

Scribbler Of Verses

April 25, 2013 at 2:18 PM

Superb!

Sara Kendrick

April 24, 2013 at 11:15 AM

Great expressive work with just a few words..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

April 23, 2013 at 8:38 AM

think what is the actuall fact of this scene, color the scene, give it sound or taste, or smell, make it concrete, line 3 is especially difficult it can contrast with the info in the first too lines. Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love