The Fallen

Soft and tender Blossoms fall- Fulfilling life

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Matthew Anish

Date: 7/20/2013 9:11:00 PM

Nice short work here - right to the point. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

Constance La France

Date: 5/3/2013 7:39:00 AM

Ray, a lovely haiku you have penned and thanks for visiting my poetry, constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2013 5:25:00 PM

this is absolutely delightful, Ray. I just love symbolic haiku!

Scribbler Of Verses

Date: 4/25/2013 2:18:00 PM

Superb!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/24/2013 11:15:00 AM

Great expressive work with just a few words..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/23/2013 8:38:00 AM

think what is the actuall fact of this scene, color the scene, give it sound or taste, or smell, make it concrete, line 3 is especially difficult it can contrast with the info in the first too lines. Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/23/2013 7:35:00 AM

There is life...there is death. Great haiku!

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/15/2013 1:53:00 PM

This one has such a happy quality.....lovely !!!