James Knox Poet Rhyme

The Fallen

I have fallen
Don’t help me up, let me spend some time here by myself ….. Alone
I feel nothing inside
Empty
Chilled to the bone
I will get up on my own 
Once again I will roll like a stone
Crawling back up through the darkness
I will reclaim my throne

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James Fraser August 21, 2009 at 2:54 PM Like a verse from Shakespear James, deep, dark but somewhat creative write>>James

Sara Kendrick August 15, 2009 at 7:25 AM Interesting. Keep writing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop August 13, 2009 at 4:02 AM yes i fall and fall yet i get up again--beautiful message,im glad my fingertips led me here--charma

Jessica Arteaga August 12, 2009 at 6:27 PM and what is it the thrown you are trying to reclaim? pride perhaps? no help, let me rise alone, empty. May be filled with yourself when accomplished alone, but when the feeling gone the loneliness stays. so many interpretation i have in my mind when reading this poem, very good!