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The Fall of Winter Night

The reclined leaf sees its color change as it waits for the fall My reposed life in autumn twilight watches the cold sun sink The void sky turning grey tells me the winter night would fall soon. May 27, 2018 15 syllables each line Contest : Sijo Poem Sponsored by : Heidi Sands

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Susan Gentry

Date: 6/13/2018 10:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Well done :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/14/2018 4:00:00 AM

Thank you, Susan.

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/2/2018 10:29:00 PM

Lovely, Subimal. Congrats on your win.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/4/2018 2:06:00 AM

Thank you, Line.

Roy Pett

Date: 6/2/2018 1:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Subimal with your beautifully written Sijo. :))

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/4/2018 2:06:00 AM

Thank you, Roy for your visit and comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/1/2018 6:41:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Sijo poem, Subimal :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/4/2018 2:05:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/31/2018 11:52:00 PM

Very well done Subimal. Congratulations for your win. Thank you for entering my contest :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/4/2018 2:05:00 AM

Thank you so much, Heidi for placing the poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2018 5:12:00 PM

I really like your sijo. It has great atmosphere.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/28/2018 10:49:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea for your appreciation.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/28/2018 3:10:00 PM

Nicely done, Subimal, great theme, turn in argument, and a twist for the Sijo ; good luck in the contest...Thank you so very much for your encouraging compliment on my poem “From Now On”. Hugs Eve

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/28/2018 10:50:00 PM

Thank you, Eve for your encouraging comments.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/27/2018 7:34:00 AM

lovely lines so pensive in tone, subimal... grreat work!... huggs

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/27/2018 11:20:00 PM

Thank you, Nette for your encouraging comments.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/27/2018 11:20:00 PM

Thank you, Nette for your encouraging comments.