Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Sijo

The Fall of Winter Night

The reclined leaf sees its color change as it waits for the fall
My reposed life in autumn twilight watches the cold sun sink
The void sky turning grey tells me the winter night would fall soon.

May 27, 2018
15 syllables each line
Contest : Sijo Poem
Sponsored by : Heidi Sands

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Susan Gentry June 13, 2018 at 10:40 PM Congratulations on your win! Well done :) Subimal Sinha-Roy June 14, 2018 at 4:00 AM Thank you, Susan.

Line Gauthier June 2, 2018 at 10:29 PM Lovely, Subimal. Congrats on your win. Subimal Sinha-Roy June 4, 2018 at 2:06 AM Thank you, Line.

Roy Pett June 2, 2018 at 1:47 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win Subimal with your beautifully written Sijo. :)) Subimal Sinha-Roy June 4, 2018 at 2:06 AM Thank you, Roy for your visit and comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 1, 2018 at 6:41 AM - Congratulations on your Sijo poem, Subimal :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :) Subimal Sinha-Roy June 4, 2018 at 2:05 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Heidi Sands May 31, 2018 at 11:52 PM Very well done Subimal. Congratulations for your win. Thank you for entering my contest :) Subimal Sinha-Roy June 4, 2018 at 2:05 AM Thank you so much, Heidi for placing the poem.

Andrea Dietrich May 28, 2018 at 5:12 PM I really like your sijo. It has great atmosphere. Subimal Sinha-Roy May 28, 2018 at 10:49 PM Thank you, Andrea for your appreciation.

Eve Roper May 28, 2018 at 3:10 PM Nicely done, Subimal, great theme, turn in argument, and a twist for the Sijo ; good luck in the contest...Thank you so very much for your encouraging compliment on my poem “From Now On”. Hugs Eve Subimal Sinha-Roy May 28, 2018 at 10:50 PM Thank you, Eve for your encouraging comments.

Nette Onclaud May 27, 2018 at 7:34 AM lovely lines so pensive in tone, subimal... grreat work!... huggs Subimal Sinha-Roy May 27, 2018 at 11:20 PM Thank you, Nette for your encouraging comments. Subimal Sinha-Roy May 27, 2018 at 11:20 PM Thank you, Nette for your encouraging comments.