Arthur Vaso Poet Light Verse

The Fall

Call me
Call me now
Let me hear your voice
As I fade from the site of you
Let your words dance over my heart
Come and kiss this last romance
Heart to heart
Lips to lip
Lets us linger in a long last kiss
All our loved ones end up dead
Let us entwine in a lovers twist
Waking up to a morning mist
Expose your breasts upon my chest
Call me now

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Pandita Sietesantos October 19, 2014 at 6:43 PM This is such a beautiful, romantic piece, Arthur with superb imagery! You just know how to articulate loving emotions in a wonderful way! I just love it! Pandita

Ana Espinola Collins October 9, 2014 at 8:18 AM Very romantic Arthur...I hope she calls too! I love your short but powerful write :) Ana Arthur Vaso October 11, 2014 at 6:35 PM Well if she calls you, just take down the message for me ok? LOL :)

Kelly Deschler October 9, 2014 at 1:23 AM A very sensual and romantic write, Arthur. I can feel the depth of longing in your words. I hope she will pick up the phone and dial.... Arthur Vaso October 11, 2014 at 6:34 PM I am such a dark poet, I dont have a phone! :)

Carolyn Devonshire October 7, 2014 at 1:15 PM Wow, such a passionate mood you create, Arthur! I'm calling - can you hear? Sadly, it is true that our loved ones "end up dead," but the way they touch our hearts will never be gone. A very romantic write! If for Justin's contest, he is sure to love this. Love, Carolyn Arthur Vaso October 11, 2014 at 6:33 PM I can hear for sure, that you always have kinds words and praise for many here, and its much appreciated! Now really, I had no idea Justin Bieber was here!!!!

Danka Sikorska October 7, 2014 at 10:15 AM I imagined a man recalling an evening spent with a beautiful woman- fireplace, fall behind the window, full moon, and lovers kissing. Very nice :) Arthur Vaso October 11, 2014 at 6:30 PM Thank you Danka :)

Billy Jones October 6, 2014 at 5:28 PM love this, it is very erotic Arthur Vaso October 11, 2014 at 6:30 PM You said exotic right? LOL

Connie Marcum Wong October 6, 2014 at 12:23 AM A lovely romantic piece that reaches out in loving thoughts. Arthur Vaso October 11, 2014 at 6:29 PM Thanks Connie :)

Brenda Meier-Hans October 5, 2014 at 11:04 PM Beautiful romantic poem yet I hear the desperation in the call me now. Arthur Vaso October 5, 2014 at 11:06 PM Last call!!! 3am!!! LOL

Tim Smith October 5, 2014 at 10:46 PM The number you gave me was wrong but the barmaid says hello. Tim Smith October 5, 2014 at 10:52 PM Oh I thought it was meoww..as in kitty Arthur Vaso October 5, 2014 at 10:50 PM 1-800-hang-menow

Charmaine Chircop October 5, 2014 at 10:13 PM Sad yet so beautiful these thoughts which express so much love-Charma Arthur Vaso October 5, 2014 at 10:23 PM Thank you, very kind of you as I thought this was terrible, just a spur of the moment thought, and I said oh what the hell, lets post it!

Dorian Petersen Potter October 5, 2014 at 9:36 PM very sad romantic write Art! I gave it a 7 because I really enjoyed the read.Xxxxx D. Arthur Vaso October 5, 2014 at 10:09 PM Thank you so much, this was more a thought than a poem, all the more reason to appreciate your kind words!