The Fall

Felt like a freight train drove through
The most loving corner of my heart
Then it felt as though I were in it
Falling out the other side
No dignity or moral to the fall 
Just a fall
When it seemed over and quiet
I stood
Smiled
Felt like a freight train drove through
The most loving corner of my heart
Then it felt as though I were in it
Falling out the other side
No dignity or moral to the fall 
Just a fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Makama Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 5:26 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
Palli Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 1:54 PM
Pain is felt here
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