The Fairest Fowl

Epitome of ostentatious pride,
the peacock, glorious in regal stride
parades his flowing train of turquoise green.

His crowning glory bursts in bold array,
a mesmerising optical display;
the greatest pageantry there's ever been.

And then begins a courtship of romance
as eyes entice in hypnotising dance
a passing peahen dazzled by the scene.

His stunning beauty shimmers in the sun
A radiant flamboyance has begun,
Ablaze with lustrous iridescent sheen.

15.10.19


Writing Challenge, October 2019 - Bird - Poetry Contest
sponsored by Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/4/2020 12:43:00 PM
Wendy, I am such a sucker for bright and bold colorful displays, so the peacock has long been my favorite bird. I love the words you use to describe this fairest of the fowl: ostentatious, mesmerising, pageantry, hypnotising, flamboyance, iridescent. A fitting panoply of glorious words for our glorious bird set to your flawless rhythm, rhyme, and flow. A fave, congrats on your win ~ John (funny, the captcha is PHN, which of course I read as peahen!)
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Date: 4/7/2020 11:12:00 AM
Great opening and closing lines! congrats on your win, Wendy
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Date: 4/6/2020 11:34:00 AM
Wendy, splendid rhyming in tercet with luxurious rich imagery. Congrats on your placement with this little gem.
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Date: 10/25/2019 6:28:00 PM
Wendy, congratulations on your great win. Hugs Eve
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2020 2:55:00 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 10/22/2019 11:36:00 AM
Wendy congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this appealing poem!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2020 2:54:00 PM
Thank you for posing the challenge, Constance.
Date: 10/21/2019 5:11:00 AM
They are magnificent birds indeed Wendy,:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2020 2:54:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Yes, an incredible display.
Date: 10/20/2019 1:09:00 PM
- A great poem :) - Congratulations on your win, Wendy :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2020 2:54:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine. I like to watch them from a dustance though as they can be quite viscious!
Date: 10/16/2019 12:17:00 PM
tis the fairest fowl no doubt! -- You have done him justice with your golden pen!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2020 2:53:00 PM
Thank you for such kind remarks,P.S. You are a constant encouragement.
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