The Fair

The fair begins today and I'm all set to play! Just like a kid, I'll stay to spend my fun-filled day! So long since I last went to this type of event. Plain joy is my intent; my perfect week, cement. I go on all the rides... glide down the water slides. For sure, fun here resides; much needed thrill provides. But, joy comes to an end. Car shifts in a downtrend, and makes her twist, descend, as her seat goes upend. My day at this fun fair leaves thoughts I cannot bear. The Ferris wheel hits snare... her loved ones...in despair. The fair began today but I'm back home to stay. To pray...no longer play... that she survives this day. February 25, 2019 Contest: At A Fair Sponsor: Julia Ward Sponsor's Required Theme: "In your poem, tell me about an unusual happening at a fair, one that takes it out of a happy time and makes it not only unexpected but sinister."

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2019 6:15:00 PM

That would be such a tragic thing to witness. Good job on the Fair challenge, Sandrea

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/4/2019 7:46:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! Hugs, Sandra

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/25/2019 12:39:00 PM

It's sad to think of how many times fun-filled activities are marred by tragedy, Sandra. Locally, we hear of such events at Orlando's theme parks, but when it happens at a fair, the victims are often known by many in attendance, compounding the horror. Your poem is written beautifully. Winning wishes coming your way for the contest, Carolyn

Sandra Haight
Date: 2/25/2019 7:21:00 PM

Yes, Carolyn, it is difficult to see such sad news at times with these bad accidents. Thank you for reading my poem and leaving such a nice comment and good wishes. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra