The Fair

The fair begins today
   and I'm all set to play! 
Just like a kid, I'll stay
   to spend my fun-filled day!

So long since I last went
   to this type of event.
Plain joy is my intent;
my perfect week, cement.
  
I go on all the rides...
   glide down the water slides.
For sure, fun here resides;
   much needed thrill provides.

But, joy comes to an end. 
   Car shifts in a downtrend,
and makes her twist, descend,
   as her seat goes upend.

My day at this fun fair
   leaves thoughts I cannot bear.
The Ferris wheel hits snare...
   her loved ones...in despair.

The fair began today
   but I'm back home to stay.
To pray...no longer play...
   that she survives this day.


February 25, 2019

Contest: At A Fair
Sponsor: Julia Ward

Sponsor's Required Theme:
"In your poem, tell me about an unusual happening
at a fair, one that takes it out of a happy time 
and makes it not only unexpected but sinister."
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Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 6:15 PM
That would be such a tragic thing to witness. Good job on the Fair challenge, Sandrea
Haight Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 7:46 PM
Thank you, Andrea! Hugs, Sandra
Devonshire Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 12:39 PM
It's sad to think of how many times fun-filled activities are marred by tragedy, Sandra. Locally, we hear of such events at Orlando's theme parks, but when it happens at a fair, the victims are often known by many in attendance, compounding the horror. Your poem is written beautifully. Winning wishes coming your way for the contest, Carolyn
Haight Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 7:21 PM
Yes, Carolyn, it is difficult to see such sad news at times with these bad accidents. Thank you for reading my poem and leaving such a nice comment and good wishes. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
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