The Fading Ink

Gemstones sell
Birthstones tell

          Stars delight
          Personality rights

            But
Hearts are falling again
Desires are ruling again

Words don't make sense anymore
And sometimes they're too much sense, its sore

Red accents....to her.. by accident 
Red accents..to him....he thinks it's access

          Well
Her take, the path there needs emerald toes fully zealous
His take, jokes and play will hold her by a yoke 

Hearts Guarded 

Hearts dreaming

Hearts roaming
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Godwin Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 9:12 AM
Two hearts: 1 of desire and flirtatious, the other solemn and serious. These are 2 people in different stages of the same relationship. Did I get it right? I ask because I felt their division and thought perhaps you wanted me to. Either way, it is a compelling write ... CayCay
Hunjeri Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 6:34 AM
Thank you CayCay i appreciate the advice :-)
Godwin Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 1:18 PM
Then the wrong people have been reading you. I learned that in order to keep your words from being tainted, you have to wisely choose creative and, especially, emotionally evolved people. If you share with those who don't expose feeling and meet it head on, they won't 'get it' and will make you feel 'inadequate.' Only share with those who live evolved. That is just my advice ... CayCay
Hunjeri Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 9:57 AM
Yes CayCay you exactly got the meaning. I understand this is another of my hard poems to understand but you got it right! Thank you for the visit CayCay
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