The Face

The rain falls silently
Against the blackness of the cottage window pane
The raindrops swirl in the air, being lifted and pulled
By the unknown forces of the breezy wind
The face in the window spends its time looking in
On other peoples lives
Looking out into the rain
The face in the window
Is thought of as a haunting of someone’s past
Never thought of as a guard
And never thought of as rational  
Its snowy, white eyes
Look into the personalities
Of little girls playing with dolls
In the 1980’s of The Cottage
Of Men and Woman loving and hating
In later times
The face in the window
Always wonders why they run away
After spending only a night or a day
In its precious little cottage
In its strange little forest
In its strange little world
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 2:24 PM
A very good poem Rebecca. Have a lovely Sunday afternoon. / /oxox - Anne-Lise :)
Berezin Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 3:03 PM
You too.
O'Leary Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 2:09 PM
Excellent! Terry
Falotico Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 12:57 PM
Excellent poetry. Well written piece Michael
Berezin Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 2:03 PM
Thanks.
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