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The Face

The face of this old man painted as the pastel portrait mute, turned grey the hard way, looks at the memory space vacant. The pensive eyes, one shrouded by the shadow of sorrow, the other brimmed by the film of frozen tears unshed for the dear ones gone, engraved in the webbed face as the scars of the lost time. _______________ June 14, 2022 Contest : The Pastel Sponsored by : Craig Cornish

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Date: 7/16/2022 5:32:00 AM
"brimmed by the film of frozen tears unshed for the dear ones gone" Wonderful penned, Subimal. Thank you for taking the time to respond to my painting. You have captured an essence of it. ~Terrilynn, TravelingArtista
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Date: 7/12/2022 11:16:00 PM
Lovely poem Subhimal....Congrats on your win:)
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Date: 7/12/2022 6:01:00 PM
Wonderfully captured is the sadness in his appearance Subimal. Congratulations on your high placement. Blessings xxoo
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