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Awarded to privileges and sanctioned embellishment favoring enhancement, Over time, years chip away unnoticeably o'er worn breathless moments, Taunt texture of an arduous youth evaporates in a whimsical hallucination, Fields of the dermis yield a harvest worthy of an ample supply of suppleness, Foretelling fluctuating skin moisturizing balms that saturates the aged cavities, Cherished heydays occupied a magnificent face for cameras to envy, In the advance of time, I am content to tender the waning years, For a fair measured distance as a camera poses for a closeup. 2020 January 10

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Date: 1/12/2020 6:29:00 PM
Hi William, Really like this piece. You have dealt with the reality of our changing "faces" with wonderful imagery. Congratulations on your HM!
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Date: 1/12/2020 7:13:00 PM
Thanks, Sam and likewise on your 2nd Place win my friend~@wk
Date: 1/12/2020 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM!;)
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Date: 1/12/2020 1:53:00 PM
I appreciate it Brenda!~@wk
Date: 1/10/2020 10:22:00 PM
William, your poem's perspective on aging is well expressed and eloquent. It is both captivating and admirable. Blessings, Evelyn
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Date: 1/11/2020 2:24:00 AM
My heartfelt thanks and extended courtesies for your kind words Evelyn~@wk

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