- The Fabulous Queen of Egypt -


Woke up to a new life in Egypt
I was young not more than seventeen years
Adorned with gold and precious stones
My body was in the shroud of silk and jewels in my hair
I sat on a throne as a Queen

My name was Cleopatra, Queen of the Nile
During the day I lay on the silk cushions
and dozed in the shade of palm trees
Beautiful men and women kept flitting
around me with all sorts of temptations
Fed me all sorts of fruit and cold drinks

When evening came, it was time for romance
As Queen I had many to choose
My choice was of course:
"The greatest men of Rome"
Julius Caesar and Marcus Antonius
Why choose one when I can have two?

On a long journey down the Nile with
my love Julius Caesar, I was forced to
make a choice.
But a choice one must take...and the
choice was that I gave birth to a son
and Julius Caesar was the father

My love life was not popular
my husband was killed and I 
was no longer popular
It was no longer a life of happiness and joy
No, it was war and national mouming
and I would not live anymore






18.03.2012
A-L Andresen :)
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O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 2:59 PM
Well done Anne! Loved how you put yourself in her shoes, great write!
Andresen Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 3:59 PM
- Thank you for visit and comments,Keith. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 2:39 PM
Terrifc write. Very original
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2012 at 2:25 AM
Anne, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Windisch Mason Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 5:35 PM
Dear Anne Lise, Well penned,excellent write!.The title is great too.I have always loved reading about Egyptian history,it is just so fascinating.This one is going on my favorite poem list.Best wishes,Tracy.
Andresen Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 5:38 PM
Tracy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Duncan Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 1:03 PM
Hey Annie,,, great poem,, love Cleopatra ;} females should rule the USA ;} have an awesome day !
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 1:18 PM
Debbie, thank you for visit and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 3:30 PM
Sometimes being a common person has its own rewards.
Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 3:36 PM
Thank you for visit and comments my poem Vince. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Shauy Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 11:09 AM
Hey Anne Lise! How lovely your poem! It is very interesting the mindset of Cleopatra, be a witness of her emotions and thoughts. Very creative piece of writing. Congratulations!
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 11:23 AM
Simone, thank you for visit and comments on my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Fountain Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 12:06 PM
This one is one if a kind love it
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 12:08 PM
Frances, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Craig Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 6:59 AM
So good felt like I was there with you/her.Who knows maybe we were!
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 10:34 AM
Maybe....lisa...maybe.Thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Martin Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 12:56 PM
Hmmm...You kindly commented on my poem "End Up Where I Began" and now its my turn to return the favor. Cleopatra caugt my eye (as she does quite often), given the fact that I live and work in the same town in which she lived and died: Alexandria, Egypt. I find it fascinating (and cosmically coincidental) that we connected in this poignantly poetic circle of common historical interest. Viva la Cleopatra, your unique poetic gift and all traces of the long lost past. Peace, Love, Poetry, Terry
Andresen Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 2:11 PM
Wooow... Terry, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Vresk Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 12:48 PM
just beautiful,you were born to write, I love your poem,Ivy
Andresen Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 2:09 PM
Ivy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 5:58 PM
Anne Lise, An inspiring Queen with both intellect and beauty and you tell her story beautifully. A very well written poem that captures the imagination.
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 6:01 PM
Thank you Connie for visit and comments on my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Guzzi Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 5:27 PM
Did she really have a child by Caeser? Light & love
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 5:31 PM
In my book, yes she did. - Thank you for visit and comments my poem Debbie. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Johnson Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 4:03 PM
perhaps you lived by the nile, and clasped your bosom the asp, with half a smile you waited awhile, till the poison Cleo did clasp...
Andresen Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 4:37 PM
Thank you Don for visit and comments my poem. - oxox Anne-Lise
Owens Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 10:29 AM
Wow! This is a beautiful poem...enjoyed...thanks for all the nice comments...Marty
Andresen Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 11:26 AM
Thank you Marty for visit and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 7:44 AM
Beautiful xx
Andresen Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 11:25 AM
Thank you Mandy for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Neels Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 7:00 AM
This is quite a write Anne Lise, really enjoyed it. Hope the weekend ahead will be a great one, love Wilma :)
Andresen Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 11:24 AM
Thank you Wilma for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Austin Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 2:55 PM
I morn for the beautiful Queen of Egypt. Such rare jewels are meant to be admired and lusted after. Put them somewhere safe. Thanks for arousing my romantic spirit, Anne. Love, daver
Andresen Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 11:23 AM
I will Daver, thank you for comments and visit. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Campi Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 5:49 PM
what an interesting poem and dream. I bet you hated to awaken. Jancarl
Andresen Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 3:16 AM
Jancarl - thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Horne Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 4:31 PM
Awesome write on Cleopatra, my friend
Andresen Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 3:15 AM
Jack, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Eastman Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 12:11 PM
A good enjoyable poem... and history lesson.
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 12:15 PM
Thank you Carol for visit and comments - oxox love Anne-Lise
Onclaud Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 11:21 AM
sweet hello to you, anne lise.. hope you are well!..:) huggs!
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 11:47 AM
Sweet hello back....hope you are well!!! oxox Anne-Lise :) :) :)
Mossburg Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 9:57 AM
I enjoyed your poetic history lesson very much. Poetry and history, my two favorite subjects.
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 11:45 AM
Steven, thank you for read and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Poet Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 8:20 AM
A captivating write here.Enjoyed the read.Thanks for ever inspiring words at my pages Anne.
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 11:44 AM
Thank you kash for read and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
. Avatar
March 20, 2012 at 10:04 PM
wonderful poem for one of the world's beauty icon Anne. good luck on the contest and thanks for stopping by :)
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 2:27 AM
It is not for a contest mia. Thank you for read and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Fitzgerald Avatar
March 20, 2012 at 9:40 PM
Always enjoy my visits to your poetry and this is another shining example why Anne , best wishes always , Declan xxx
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 2:25 AM
Thank you Deck for always read and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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