The Fabric of Summer

With melancholic fortitude
   I suffer Summer's threadbare wane
 Though just a stitch of Autumn's gown
Shows through these tepid, shorter days
      The weave of sultry memories
   Drapes warm nostalgia on my heart
     I'll wear this paling green till frost 

                   07 Sep 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/7/2019 9:15:00 AM
It is difficult to let go of the warmth...I'll wear this paling green till frost...lovely line.
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Date: 10/3/2019 6:33:00 PM
I love this, the imagery and content speak to me with poetic skills that engage and fulfill in delivery. A wonderful gem! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 9/13/2019 7:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win David...your second line is my fav.
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Date: 9/13/2019 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations, David!
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Date: 9/12/2019 4:58:00 PM
wow, David. It's always so good to see your work when you pop up on a contest list. you never disappoint .Congrats on the well deserved win
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Date: 9/12/2019 12:47:00 PM
- Goodbye Summer .... and congratulations on your winning poem, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/12/2019 11:33:00 AM
yes, i really felt the pinch of your poetic mood and expressive language, david!...thanks for gracing my contest and big congrats!...huggs
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Date: 9/12/2019 9:20:00 AM
Beautiful wording so well penned. Congrats. Lonna
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Date: 9/12/2019 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations and this is a wonderful poem. Blessings
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Date: 9/12/2019 7:36:00 AM
...a stitch of Autumn's gown....Damn that is good David....A poetic painting to hang in the corner of the mind.
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Date: 9/12/2019 5:33:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win!;)
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Date: 9/12/2019 4:24:00 AM
Congrats on your first place win for this beautifully written piece, David. John
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Date: 9/12/2019 4:15:00 AM
It's no surprise that Nette, was also enraptured by your wonderful poem,David. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/9/2019 10:18:00 AM
this is one of the best i've seen so far for the contest; i love the whole fabric/clothing idea because it's a very original take on the theme - good luck in the contest but i don't think you'll need it!
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Date: 9/7/2019 8:31:00 PM
This was simply amazing! Wow! Lol I guess I should bow out of the contest gracefully! Truly was an amazing write I won't say good luck in the contest because it is s top place winner!;)
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Date: 9/7/2019 10:43:00 AM
This is so cleverly constructed,David. I love the 'clothing' theme woven throughout with verbs and nouns and the title is a perfect fit. Some wonderful 'touches'. I really enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 9/7/2019 10:36:00 AM
Very nice! :)
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