The Eyes of a Dreamer

I have beautiful eyes,
the eyes of a dreamer;
looking away as
if taken by wander...


Nothing goes by them
that I don't notice;
and everything but age
can change their glance...


Mellow eyes of dreamer, not much transformed
by the tragedies unfolding in your peaceful path;  
rarely distracted, always focused
on your strange selfishness that molds your wit...  


Distance is a mystery impossible to be explained or revealed,
that one which keeps its shadows active,
to hide what cannot be endured by fear;
and without an optimistic insight, nothing is ever discerned... 
 

I have beautiful eyes,
the eyes of a dreamer;
with many visions of bliss, without the gloom and the agony of demise;
an existence absent of pain, a life so despised by a clever achiever...


Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 14, 2009 at 9:18 AM
Andrew, never think of yourself as having "strange selfishness." You share your thoughts as beautifully as you write! This reminded me a bit of my poem "Unicorn." I have a sleep disorder and have spent much time trying to study the meaning and impact of dreams. Good job. Happy Valentine's Day, Carolyn
Jordan Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 5:01 AM
Andrew - Dream on bro - dream on - beautiful poem - God Bless, MJ
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