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The Eyes' Most Beautiful Moment

Eyes, looking back from inside the secure area of a departures hall, through 10, 20, 30 meters of busy space, around other, blocking passengers, seeking me out as I stand outside looking in, then finding me, locking onto, talking into, my own eyes, instantly defocusing everything else. That’s how eyes are meant to look.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/10/2018 1:43:00 PM
If we have never experienced this, we have now.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 10/10/2018 2:02:00 PM
Oh Caren, that is the best comment I have received yet (second place goes to another comment of yours). Thank you.

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