The Eyes Have It

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In my mind I'm reminiscing, walking backwards in memory, To the gilded edges of time, when you first laid eyes on me, In a beautiful hummingbird hour, of the orange sunflower, And days and nights eclectic, as a vivid fireworks shower! Under clear skies of sapphire, in very youthful days of May, I saw you for the first time, when gardens offered bouquets, In the midst of the rosy season, and the moonstruck nights, I discerned love at first sight, in wildflower days-that's right!

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/17/2021 5:06:00 PM

Fascinating array of images here, Evelyn... And you must have 20/10 vision to pick out your man amidst all that multicolor splendor!! Cheers, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/17/2021 8:58:00 PM

Thank you for all of your very nice remarks, Gershon. And no worries about my vision. I was wearing sunglasses. :0 Cheers

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/11/2021 7:53:00 PM

Hello Evelyn ... your observance nature poems are really nice, full of colour, therefore filled with beauty - thank you Evelyn - Lindsay

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/12/2021 3:36:00 PM

Hello Lindsay, you are most welcome. Thank you so much for your nice comments.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/8/2021 7:14:00 PM

Dear Evelyn, your use of nature and color is exquisite and so expressive of love at first sight. Love your title and your music video is a beautiful accompaniment to your luscious poem. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/8/2021 9:23:00 PM

Thank you for your heartwarming remarks, dear Susan. Your warm appreciation is a joy to see. Have a lovely weekend, dear friend, Evelyn