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Suzanne Delaney Avatar

The Eye of Suzanne Delaney

The greenery surrounds...
Like a tint of nature 
Blue moon floating in pure white clouds 
Invasion of the black hole 
A tear duct so deep...so sexy 
Lashes long, spread perfectly so 
Framed of peachy skin 
Half winked and gorgeously shaped...
With a mild soft wind above the brow 
Fascinated...I am
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Delaney Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 3:24 PM
Very insightful, Charles: I chose my Avatar because of my love and connection to Nature. I definitly identify with the Goddesses of each season, leaves, flowers, snowflakes,blossoms....the first time I used it was for a poetry challenge where I wrote the eyes of Mother Nature and then I adopted it for my avatar, How fun!! Thanks for the honor. I think I am challenged now to write one about your cowboy hat...lol SuZ
Messina Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 9:00 PM
LOL...Uh oh, I could be in trouble now. There is a reason for that cowboy hat...I wear it as a remembrance piece. I wrote about it in my poem for a contest called "who is that star in your avatar" Thanks, Suz...for your lovely comments. Poetry hugs Charlie
La France Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 10:13 AM
Charlie, such a beautiful sensual poem, that sure is a lovely avatar, well done ~
Laurie Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 10:09 PM
G'day Charles … I'm certain Suzanne will be chuffed by your beaut verse - well done Charles - Lindsay
Messina Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 9:05 PM
Thank you, Lindsay!
Cunningham Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 1:50 PM
And a beautiful eye it is too Charlie. She'll like this one I'm sure. Tom.
Messina Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 9:05 PM
I hope so! Hoping all is well Tom..Charlie
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 10:08 AM
Very cool :)
Messina Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 9:04 PM
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