The Evil Touch

The touch of your hand
so sweet, so firm
compassionate and lively,
though it brings hurt.
 
But what does a touch bring?
only love, guidance, trust;
a feeling of need and want
a feeling of tangible lust.
 
In that you have cursed upon me
oh,why?  your hand upon my skin 
and must my blood have your name on it?
all of the questions, my patience thins.
 
Your warmth upon my frigid cold heart
release of my evil, but a new form abroad
a curse in my name and my love
of your name in my blood and the sinners applaud.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 6:01 AM
Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,
Lindley Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 8:54 AM
This has soul in it that sings of emotions that run ever so deeply.. I like it!!! Bravo!
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May 19, 2014 at 1:13 PM
MaryEllen,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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May 18, 2014 at 2:26 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Rainau. Hope you find much support here. Comment on the poems of other members and they will return the favor. Best wishes.
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May 18, 2014 at 2:27 PM
Excuse me, Maryellen. Faye
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May 18, 2014 at 11:18 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,MaryEllen :) - I choose your first very well written rhyme poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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May 17, 2014 at 9:17 PM
Maryellen, wow, love the awesome ending twist,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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