William Kelii Kekaula Poet Ode

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Poetic Form: Ode

1438 COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Brian Strand

Entry Submitted: 2025 January 08

Contest Judged: 2025 January 10

Contest Placement: 2nd Place

The Event

The quiet dawn, the sun’s first ray,
A hidden strength that saves the day,
The gentle rhythm of your heart,
Proof that wonder, a living art.
No grand display of sea and sky,
But simple grace as moments fly;
For every breath and every start,
A sweet miracle plays its part.

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Susan Ashley March 8, 2026 at 6:56 PM Dear William, the soul of your poem is beautiful. Your expressive imagery brings it to life. Congratulations for your success in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan William Kelii Kekaula March 8, 2026 at 8:25 PM Heart-warming words that truly touch the soul. Greatly appreciated, Susan, Aloha.

Sara Kendrick January 12, 2026 at 5:33 AM Congrats on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K William Kelii Kekaula January 12, 2026 at 9:50 AM I am very well pleased, William.

Krishnanand Guptar January 11, 2026 at 7:55 AM Congratulations, dear poet, on your win in this contest with a lovely poem on quiet dawn that has made the "event". Particularly appreciated the last two verses : "For every breath and every start, A sweet miracle plays its part." William Kelii Kekaula January 11, 2026 at 4:40 PM Thank you kindly, fellow souper. I am truly honored by your generous highlights. Aloha, William.

Paige Hind January 8, 2026 at 8:20 PM Pretty :) William Kelii Kekaula January 9, 2026 at 9:57 AM ;)