William Kelii Kekaula Poet Abecedarian

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The Eternals Wake - Ap

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The Eternals Wake

Afterlifer's believes consciousness dabbles, effecting furtherance,
gainsayers, henceforth, interjects jocularity,
knowledgeable limits mortality nonbeing ... obliviates predominating, quasistationary,
relinquishes significance tasked ultrafamiliar,
vaticinators wanderings xenial,
yearning zen.

2021 October 18

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Sotto Poet November 14, 2021 at 7:08 PM You have a natural talent for writing around the flow of things. My friend, your poem is fantastic. However, I submitted a poem with 26 lines, one line for each letter, and I'm not sure if that's acceptable. William Kelii Kekaula November 14, 2021 at 8:15 PM Lasaad, thanks for entering, and tho' my exampled Abecedarian was phrased and not listed, I didn't specify line limitations yet 26 would have been a factor and therefore acceptable, Aloha!

Evelyn Swartz November 12, 2021 at 12:01 AM You truly have a gift for putting words together that flow. You poem is excellent. Your friend, Evelyn William Kelii Kekaula November 12, 2021 at 12:10 AM I welcome your gracious support, Evelyn, a hearty thanks my friend, Aloha!

Eve Roper November 8, 2021 at 6:09 AM Great example, William William Kelii Kekaula November 8, 2021 at 7:36 AM Eve, thanks my friend, Aloha!

Anisha Dutta November 4, 2021 at 9:43 AM So many tough words you have used. I will attempt in easier way. Blessings William Kelii Kekaula November 4, 2021 at 10:49 AM Yes, Anisha, much less difficult words out there and I'm glad for your interest my friend, Aloha!

Bukang Liwayway October 31, 2021 at 10:23 PM Wow! great poem I like it...not yet use this form yet but I will try. thanks for sharing. have a great day. ;) William Kelii Kekaula October 31, 2021 at 10:34 PM Here's to hoping you the very best, whether if you enter or not. Peace and joy my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich October 31, 2021 at 12:04 PM very well done, William. It certainly is a difficult form and you really rose to your own challenge! William Kelii Kekaula October 31, 2021 at 1:24 PM I found that pre-alphabetizing to formulate words creating a sensical theme via an Abecedarian form was less difficult than taking it out-of-order via Free Verse. Whichever one tries, its measure will be taxing. My heartfelt thanks, Andrea, Aloha!

Jan Allison October 29, 2021 at 3:53 PM Thanks for the inspiration, having read both your examples it will be fun writing for the contest:-) hugs jan xx William Kelii Kekaula October 29, 2021 at 5:13 PM Great share, Jan, here's to you ere the fun, Aloha!

Joanna Daniel October 29, 2021 at 12:24 AM Cool, William, so deep and great use of words:) William Kelii Kekaula October 29, 2021 at 1:34 AM Thanks, Jo, a bit of a stretch, happy to oblige, Aloha!