The Eternal Infernos of Pain

Front and Center!
Those Gates adorned with pearls in Heaven.
White angels soaring. 

If by chance, 
Ordered to enter;
Through St. Peter's Permission; 
I demand from you chancellor; 
A swift insanity plea, submission. 
For this troubled soul is plagued, 
By vast displays of wicked ways. 

None lost. 
Courtesy of meticulous examination. 
Love lost. 

Diligence pending Investigation. 
Key Evidence, perpetually documented 
In Sin's ominous catalog. 
Rebuke my Judge! 
For multitudes of shortcomings, 
He failed to ascertain. 

Moreover, present was He, 
When Satan drafted me. 
First round,
Pick three.
His Fantasy League...
"The Eternal Infernos of Pain" 

JS Lambert

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/17/2011 9:55:00 PM
Very nice my friend. Also I'm glad you liked my poem 'Lou.' That meant a lot to me:) Thank you so much. I gave this a 7. R.M.
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Date: 3/4/2011 1:13:00 PM
WOW, this is a well done poem! I'm impressed, but if only more people realize that God never forces them to choose sin...we choose it. But he still loves us enough to offer us a way out of the "Eternal Infernos of Pain" That way is faith in his son Jesus....who paid our fine for us in his life's blood....why? So we could go free!
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:33:00 PM
Creative and absolutely a fine meaningful write, joseph
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