The Essence of the Being

'You are the tea leaves I am the teapot 
I the tiny snowflake and you the snow’
This is how the essence of life shuffles 
Forth and past you and me.
I am the head you are the crown
Making me feel the king 
Of our fancy land, in which 
The subjects were but two, you and me,
Who owed allegiance to whom 
Remained still unredeemed.  

Beaming down from the sky 
You are the sunlight, gushing down
Towards the mother earth 
In a flow of transparent bright,
I the rainbow, beset with your rhyme,
Proclaim my adoration for the sky 
Only on days rainy, by embracing 
It tightly in my seven-colored wings
To save it blushes in its dress-up gloomy.

You are the gold I am its ornament
You are the verse which hides in me
To make me glitter and 
Give me a feel angelic.
I am the rose you are its smell
Who's the one who'd 
In its contentment versify
To make the other get its due?

A life that thirsts for the other
Is incomplete in its solitude,
A body and soul enshrined in one
Is a deed that captures the life
In the essence of its being.  
 

‘You are the tea leaves I am the teapot I the tiny snowflake and you the snow’
Ode to Mum by Maria Williams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 11:01 PM
Pramod, great written poem and a big congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest-. Hugs Eve
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March 31, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Dear Eve, Sorry for this late response as due to lockdown, I find myself stranded away from home, but feel lucky to be at an academic institution and a very friendly environment. Thanks for your kind comments, Pramod
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March 25, 2020 at 3:00 PM
- An impressive poem, Pramod :) - Congratulations on a well deserved first place in the contest :) - Stay healthy and safe :) - regards // Anne-Lise :)
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March 31, 2020 at 6:07 AM
Dear Ann-Lise, Due to lockdown, I find myself stranded away from home, but feel lucky to be at an academic institution and a very friendly environment. Thanks for your comments, Pramod
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March 25, 2020 at 5:35 AM
a profound poem, which is philosophically written.. The last stanza completes it very well, I can see how you were inspired by the line... Congratulations on you first place in the contest..
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March 31, 2020 at 6:03 AM
Thanks for your very kind words. I owe my thanks to you for providing such thought-provoking lines. There's so much food for thought in them. Pramod
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