The Essence of Our Universe

The essence of our Universe

Our spirits, sweet voices from deep within our souls !
They sing beautiful songs, the lyrics - who knows ?

Many tunes ring out, into space – out into the Universe.
The essence of us comes to light, sometimes in verse.

The essence for many, they hide in the dark – a tomb
to house their silent spirits, fractured souls in the womb

B. J. “A” 2
February 3rd 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lariviere Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 4:49 PM
I liked this gem of a poem.
Atfield Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 5:56 PM
Bonjour Etienne Lariviere : Merci Ami for your kind comment “ I liked this gem of a poem. ” and thank you Etienne, for looking in on my site. Having read all that you have put on poetrysoup leaves me with the impressions that ( one ) you are new to the site – six poems listed – and ( two ) the impression is ( if I were a psychologist ) you are either really very good or your are living in ( symphonie du papillon - The sadness of life eats me., Je suis Charlie- In my tomb my soul still cries red., La Peinture noire - I cry It is simply A black painting., La naissance d'un autre Beau Dommage - Yesterday, I fell in the blackness of the night Into the sea of sadness., expressions - Those who try. may fail Those who never try, are failures. How true !!! ) in a world of doubts and depression . B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill . )
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February 6, 2015 at 12:42 PM
Came back to read more of your works...I am not disappointed...Your words touches the soul, and mine responded. A pleasure to read, and ponder upon...Smiles from the land of thousand isles...:D Kim
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