Dalia Shahein Poet Rhyme

The Erasing Poem

From today on I shall feel no regret , no remorse 
And the love that I'm captivating should be killed from the source...
The love that in the veins should be stopped 
And the drowned eyes won't allow another tear to be dropped... 
I'll vanquish the penned fear and get released 
That's how I'll guaranteed that my heart and soul shall live in peace... 
I'll erase you from my memory , I'll erase you from my heart 
Letting go the ghost of the past and get along with a new start...

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DM Babbit November 21, 2016 at 9:02 AM If only it were that easy. Dalia Shahein November 21, 2016 at 10:10 AM Yeah , if only , I really appreciate your stopping by dear friend , hugs / / :)

White Sage November 16, 2016 at 2:02 PM I wish the memories of the past could be easy to wipe away, but since it's hard, only your strength to endure and live on is best assuring. I hope the ghost fades away, am sure you can do it. Dalia Shahein November 17, 2016 at 5:50 PM I'm really great full for ur supporting words they mean so much , thank u for stopping by//hugs??

Suzanne Delaney November 15, 2016 at 6:20 PM Wonderful self reliance showing through. When you let go you always shift the power. SuZ Dalia Shahein November 15, 2016 at 6:44 PM Definitely right , it's such a pleasure to meet you as well dear Suz , much appreciated / hugs

Probir Gupta November 10, 2016 at 8:41 AM The inexorable shadow of the past notwithstanding, we all should try to live as much as possible in and with the present ... admirable attitude in the poem ... Dalia Shahein November 10, 2016 at 1:52 PM Your absolutely right my friend , thank you for your lovely feedback and beautiful word , much appreciated , hugs / :)

G. Jay November 9, 2016 at 8:49 PM I really like the flow of the last two lines. Dalia Shahein November 10, 2016 at 7:26 AM I'm glad you do , thank you for stopping by and comment , hugs / / :)