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The Erasing Poem

From today on I shall feel no regret , no remorse And the love that I'm captivating should be killed from the source... The love that in the veins should be stopped And the drowned eyes won't allow another tear to be dropped... I'll vanquish the penned fear and get released That's how I'll guaranteed that my heart and soul shall live in peace... I'll erase you from my memory , I'll erase you from my heart Letting go the ghost of the past and get along with a new start...

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DM Babbit

Date: 11/21/2016 9:02:00 AM

If only it were that easy.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 11/21/2016 10:10:00 AM

Yeah , if only , I really appreciate your stopping by dear friend , hugs / / :)

White Sage

Date: 11/16/2016 2:02:00 PM

I wish the memories of the past could be easy to wipe away, but since it's hard, only your strength to endure and live on is best assuring. I hope the ghost fades away, am sure you can do it.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 11/17/2016 5:50:00 PM

I'm really great full for ur supporting words they mean so much , thank u for stopping by//hugs??

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 11/15/2016 6:20:00 PM

Wonderful self reliance showing through. When you let go you always shift the power. SuZ

Dalia Shahein
Date: 11/15/2016 6:44:00 PM

Definitely right , it's such a pleasure to meet you as well dear Suz , much appreciated / hugs

Probir Gupta

Date: 11/10/2016 8:41:00 AM

The inexorable shadow of the past notwithstanding, we all should try to live as much as possible in and with the present ... admirable attitude in the poem ...

Dalia Shahein
Date: 11/10/2016 1:52:00 PM

Your absolutely right my friend , thank you for your lovely feedback and beautiful word , much appreciated , hugs / :)

G. Jay

Date: 11/9/2016 8:49:00 PM

I really like the flow of the last two lines.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 11/10/2016 7:26:00 AM

I'm glad you do , thank you for stopping by and comment , hugs / / :)