The Epiphany Rose


"The Epiphany Rose"

All well and good,
the story unfolds;
the isolating madness 
drew out the poets 
in all the shunned
playing up and out 
their origami
word games

something like 
an epiphany rose
in them, the mad,
recalcitrant ones,
like nuns leaving 
the genuflecting aisles
turning backs 
before all their 
starched alters
dripping idols 
no longer really there,
they were somewhere
outside of It all;

the closed rose 
turned around 
to walk as one, 
out the doors
into the blazing sun
finding some 
strange reunion,
peeling off their 
dark layers, 
their novitiate
romance, their
too hot habits
disgarded 
under indigo sky
of long dark nights,
reeling in the dream
like cotton thread
from a spinning wheel,
strange Ezekial creatures, 
their nakedness 
witnessed like
whirling dervish 
calling in revolutions,
the expected extracted
arriving in the rolling clouds 

another kingdom comes

swiftly opening
minds like roman candles
exploding like spiders
across the stars…

the timeless road 
is now wide open
and well lit

(Ladylabyrinth / 2023)





"…the only people for me are the mad ones, the ones who are mad to live, mad to talk, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at the same time, the ones who never yawn or say a commonplace thing, but burn, burn, burn like fabulous yellow roman candles exploding like spiders across the stars…” 
(Keroac)



"Wherever the spirit would go, they would go, and the wheels would rise along with them, because the spirit of the living creatures was in the wheels. When the creatures moved, they also moved; when the creatures stood still, they also stood still; and when the creatures rose from the ground, the wheels rose along with them, because the spirit of the living creatures was in the wheels." 
(Ezekial)



“Oh, honey my life and it's got me old fool gold
In the gold dust rush I can only genuflect
Oh, honey my life and it's got me old fool gold

In the gold dust rush
In the gold dust rush

Honey it is horrible
(In the gold dust rush)
There's locusts in there
She's got the old fool gold …"
(Cocteau Twins)




"The Meditative Rose"/Dali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 9/7/2023 8:07:00 AM
An amazing write/great pictures. Thanks for the note at the bottom. Your golden pen was working overtime. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away............
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/7/2023 4:03:00 PM
Thank you. I shall. :) xx
Date: 9/6/2023 4:06:00 AM
Speaking in tongues...
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/6/2023 5:45:00 PM
for Georgia. Xx
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/6/2023 5:45:00 PM
https://youtu.be/XTx8VnZBvDc?si=n_88mO3130s0Ezvo
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/6/2023 5:45:00 PM
https://youtu.be/0LVyIJsigXU?si=sR7u-8nB_RlJdvZq
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/6/2023 5:45:00 PM
https://youtu.be/ZpqaNjtaU6o?si=I3MLXpAvtiXFaUvY
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/6/2023 9:59:00 AM
Yes, a vibrant speaking voice. I miss youth...you and your friends would make terrific neighbors...make all the noise you want. I still play drums -- a fair tradeoff?:) Blessings.
Date: 9/5/2023 9:35:00 PM
"swiftly opening minds like roman candles exploding like spiders across the stars…" Great imagery and use of language. Of course, God needs no traditions -- needs no steel cages to keep his wild animals in, for theirs and His protection...trusting more in heated living, than the chilling effects of faithless fear -- "lukewarm, and I will spit you out" - Another FAV from me!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/6/2023 6:06:00 PM
Love it! Old school jazz still my favorite, but I love it all. Blessings.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/6/2023 6:01:00 PM
Surreal.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/6/2023 6:00:00 PM
Yes, DiMino, in response to your comment re "beating drums" - one must beat their drums for as long as they can, in whatever manner.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/6/2023 5:59:00 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mz4I4FOe2b8&ab_channel=AggieFrost
Date: 9/5/2023 5:52:00 PM
Siegfried Zademack (1952-)/Surrealist
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/5/2023 5:53:00 PM
https://surrealism.website/Siegfried%20Zademack.html
Date: 9/5/2023 5:45:00 PM
"The Meditative Rose", Salvador Dali/Surrealist https://www.dalipaintings.com/rose-meditative.jsp
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James Moore
Date: 9/5/2023 5:49:00 PM
I thought so, most likely. (Thanks for the clarification/credit)
Date: 9/5/2023 5:30:00 PM
Whew... wow...yes, indeed...F'in A! Your poetry is certainly making my time here worthwhile! "another kingdom comes swiftly opening minds like roman candles exploding like spiders across the stars… the timeless road is now wide open and well lit"
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/5/2023 5:41:00 PM
origami; playing up and out...
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James Moore
Date: 9/5/2023 5:34:00 PM
Ps. love the accompanying art too. Is it yours? It's amazing!
Date: 9/5/2023 5:29:00 PM
"In the Gold Dust Rush"/Cocteau Twins
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/5/2023 5:29:00 PM
https://youtu.be/D2h7G5GiaW4?si=wyefmtJl99PHVc3W
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/5/2023 5:29:00 PM
LYRICS/"In the Gold Dust Rush", Cocteau Twins https://www.songlyrics.com/cocteau-twins/in-the-gold-dust-rush-lyrics/
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