The Epilogue

From a zygote spark grown
such a life she has known,
full of prayer and hope.
My, how bravely she did cope.

Now, she sits and stares
entranced by the hairs
on the back of her wrinkled hand
as the clock on its stand ... ticks.

Often, as if in a daze,
she'll peer through her haze
awakened to the ticking sound,
and the earth shifts its ground.

Her hair has turned to gray
and time just  wends its way
through the story of a life led
that will soon vanish from her head.

All those kisses, all the wishes,
all the laundry, all the dishes
all the memories ...
pass like a breeze.

Yes, she came to this earth
to laugh, to love, to give birth
but before she gets away ...
was there a point to this play?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Heck Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 7:17 AM
Dear Sue - Such a wonderful write! Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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November 12, 2008 at 4:40 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Sue. It is an honor to be listed with you and your wonderful work. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 11:39 PM
Sue - once again outstanding - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
Martin Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 7:38 PM
OKAY you are so wonderfull I love everything you write it always makes me either cry or laugh till I can't breath congrades on making it threw first round if it was up to me you would be winner already your friend Nita
George   Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 3:17 PM
BRILLIANT!!!!! Best wishes for the next round. lainie, P.s. Thank you for all your kind comments. Much appreciated.
Augustus Avatar
October 28, 2008 at 2:14 PM
Congratulations for making it to the semis.
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October 27, 2008 at 12:09 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery in this poem. Congratulations on making the semi-finals! Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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October 27, 2008 at 5:55 AM
Warmest congrats Sue on making it through the first round! Good luck! And don't forget - you are already a winner!!! Love, Shar
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October 27, 2008 at 3:46 AM
My congratulations to you, Sue, for your "The Epilogue" making it to the next round, goodluck! Rgds, Ernesto
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October 27, 2008 at 1:16 AM
Congrats on your success in PS contest,best wishes for next round Sue Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my blog
Jordan Avatar
September 13, 2008 at 6:25 PM
Sue - Outstanding poem - I read your comment on my blog - a couple of our members were using the comment box on their poem as personal sexual e-mails as to reach the top poems list - they would have 60 comments all from one person and all about what they would do to each other on their date and nothing regarding poetry - Thats what the deal was it really got out of hand quickly - God Bless Sue
Spence Sr Avatar
September 3, 2008 at 3:41 PM
This is excellent. The piece flows very well. I like the message. Great job! ~Joseph
Young Avatar
August 5, 2008 at 1:59 AM
left me totally speechless.very well written. what a brainteaser! with much respect and adoration, GiNo,18,Philippines
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August 4, 2008 at 7:54 PM
a very good piece of fine poetry.
George   Avatar
August 2, 2008 at 7:22 PM
Wow!!!! Sue - this blew me away. What powerful images and emotions you have stirred up in this great write. Profound thoughts to ponder here. SENSATIONAL!!! lainie
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July 4, 2008 at 7:07 PM
Very beautiful, but makes one's heart ache. Your purpose was you. You are the purpose, because you know....because you ventured here, lives in one degree or another, have been changed, touched. It's not in vain. Sometimes I feel like that, too, though, even though I am not old, lol. Beautifully written and depthful, Sara
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June 11, 2008 at 10:11 AM
I like the rhyming couplets and the flow of the lines. I can see the images of the hand, hair and ticking clock. There is always a moral to every story which depends on the reader. This is wonderful. Great job! ~ Joseph
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June 11, 2008 at 8:04 AM
Thank you for sharing this heart-touching poem. The imagery is splendid and highly detailed. I really enjoyed! Milt
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June 11, 2008 at 12:30 AM
Fine work Sue..one for my favourites listing.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts
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June 10, 2008 at 1:46 PM
Yes there was a point. Each human being brings something special to the table. Remember "The Old Lamplighter" by the Browns. He made the world a little brighter. Each of us do that in one way or another. God Bless, Sue. Vince
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June 10, 2008 at 5:38 AM
Sue, first off this has excellent flow to it as the rhyme is perfect. The sentiment within does in fact reveal itself to the reader and leavesus thinking about what we do within out lifetime, our purpose. Great effect. Terrific write. Michael
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