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The Envious Peach and Her Demise

The envious peach tree watched the nut produce great quantities so she resolved to do the same “no one out does me.” When the harvest came her children did abound which caused her roots to snap and broke her to the ground.

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Daver Austin

Date: 10/19/2015 12:34:00 PM

A peach of a poem. Congrats, daver

Brian Dempsey

Date: 10/19/2015 7:53:00 AM

Oh, the wretched curse of envy! Loved it.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/18/2015 7:36:00 PM

Your words have soft flows. “no one out does me.” I am broken as well.....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/5/2015 5:20:00 PM

Hi Anthony, This is my warm welcome to you, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 10/5/2015 2:13:00 PM

Sad fall, Anthony Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT