The Entwined Hearts

Two trees side by side
Leaves danced together once, interleaved
In the music of the spring air,
All dry and fallen now, uncared.
Branches reached out once, entangled,
Tenderly caressed the blooming flowers,
All broken and bent now, unembraced.
In the twilight gleam
The cracked trunks still glow,
The enmeshed roots not yet dry
Hold each other close, unseen,
Brace the face of storm, they turn into mural wood.  

Two figures stand, you and me,
In the falling light of the setting sun,
Become the dust of the golden days,
Covered by decades of togetherness
Don’t blow now in the winter breeze.
The embracing arms once warm and agile
Now petrified by time, unsaught.
Love in the twilight colors still glitters 
In the crevasses of our wrinkled faces,
The entwined hearts not yet old
Pulsate to the music of youth, undisrupted,
In life's symphony, we turn into violin.

May 2, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/5/2018 9:51:00 PM
Beautifully penned, congratulations on your first Place Sumimal. Mick
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/7/2018 2:42:00 AM
Thank you, Mick for your visit and encouraging comments.
Date: 5/4/2018 9:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Subimal. Well done.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/5/2018 2:36:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 5/3/2018 11:08:00 PM
Hi Subimal, This is a beautiful piece about love in the free verse form.Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest:-) Alexis
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2018 1:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis.
Date: 5/3/2018 10:14:00 PM
This is so beautiful! Congratulations on your #1 win. I like how you weave it altogether. Enjoyed a lot.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2018 1:15:00 AM
Thank you, Susan for your visit and liking the poem.
Date: 5/3/2018 2:57:00 PM
Very beautiful and true love so wonderfully expressed through your well-written poem, Subimal. Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2018 1:15:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra.
Date: 5/3/2018 2:48:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL sweet Subimal :) Love the strong usage of imagery, well deserved top placement. I am never surprised to see you place high in contests :) Thank you for entering and congratulations on your placement...be blessed :)-luloo
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2018 1:14:00 AM
Thank you, Laura for your encouraging comments and for the placement.
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