The Entwined Hearts

Two trees side by side
Leaves danced together once, interleaved
In the music of the spring air,
All dry and fallen now, uncared.
Branches reached out once, entangled,
Tenderly caressed the blooming flowers,
All broken and bent now, unembraced.
In the twilight gleam
The cracked trunks still glow,
The enmeshed roots not yet dry
Hold each other close, unseen,
Brace the face of storm, they turn into mural wood.  

Two figures stand, you and me,
In the falling light of the setting sun,
Become the dust of the golden days,
Covered by decades of togetherness
Don’t blow now in the winter breeze.
The embracing arms once warm and agile
Now petrified by time, unsaught.
Love in the twilight colors still glitters 
In the crevasses of our wrinkled faces,
The entwined hearts not yet old
Pulsate to the music of youth, undisrupted,
In life's symphony, we turn into violin.

May 2, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Talbot Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 9:51 PM
Beautifully penned, congratulations on your first Place Sumimal. Mick
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 2:42 AM
Thank you, Mick for your visit and encouraging comments.
Gauthier Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 9:31 PM
Congrats on your win, Subimal. Well done.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 2:36 AM
Thank you, Line.
Y. Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 11:08 PM
Hi Subimal, This is a beautiful piece about love in the free verse form.Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest:-) Alexis
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 1:16 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis.
Gentry Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 10:14 PM
This is so beautiful! Congratulations on your #1 win. I like how you weave it altogether. Enjoyed a lot.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 1:15 AM
Thank you, Susan for your visit and liking the poem.
Haight Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 2:57 PM
Very beautiful and true love so wonderfully expressed through your well-written poem, Subimal. Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 1:15 AM
Thank you, Sandra.
Scars Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 2:48 PM
BEAUTIFUL sweet Subimal :) Love the strong usage of imagery, well deserved top placement. I am never surprised to see you place high in contests :) Thank you for entering and congratulations on your placement...be blessed :)-luloo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 1:14 AM
Thank you, Laura for your encouraging comments and for the placement.
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