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The Entwined Hearts

Two trees side by side Leaves danced together once, interleaved In the music of the spring air, All dry and fallen now, uncared. Branches reached out once, entangled, Tenderly caressed the blooming flowers, All broken and bent now, unembraced. In the twilight gleam The cracked trunks still glow, The enmeshed roots not yet dry Hold each other close, unseen, Brace the face of storm, they turn into mural wood. Two figures stand, you and me, In the falling light of the setting sun, Become the dust of the golden days, Covered by decades of togetherness Don’t blow now in the winter breeze. The embracing arms once warm and agile Now petrified by time, unsaught. Love in the twilight colors still glitters In the crevasses of our wrinkled faces, The entwined hearts not yet old Pulsate to the music of youth, undisrupted, In life's symphony, we turn into violin. May 2, 2018

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Date: 5/5/2018 9:51:00 PM
Beautifully penned, congratulations on your first Place Sumimal. Mick
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/7/2018 2:42:00 AM
Thank you, Mick for your visit and encouraging comments.
Date: 5/4/2018 9:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Subimal. Well done.
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Date: 5/5/2018 2:36:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 5/3/2018 11:08:00 PM
Hi Subimal, This is a beautiful piece about love in the free verse form.Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/4/2018 1:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis.
Date: 5/3/2018 10:14:00 PM
This is so beautiful! Congratulations on your #1 win. I like how you weave it altogether. Enjoyed a lot.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2018 1:15:00 AM
Thank you, Susan for your visit and liking the poem.
Date: 5/3/2018 2:57:00 PM
Very beautiful and true love so wonderfully expressed through your well-written poem, Subimal. Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2018 1:15:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra.
Date: 5/3/2018 2:48:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL sweet Subimal :) Love the strong usage of imagery, well deserved top placement. I am never surprised to see you place high in contests :) Thank you for entering and congratulations on your placement...be blessed :)-luloo
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/4/2018 1:14:00 AM
Thank you, Laura for your encouraging comments and for the placement.

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