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The Enormous Silence

The Enormous Silence And now the enormous silence Dark clouds, dark day, dark eyes Stare back from my watery mirror. The silent treatment. Bitter medicine heals neither of us. No malice of forethought. No premeditation. Only the criminal called best intent. Walks quietly on the road to hell That is this enormous silence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/29/2013 8:44:00 AM
I have walked this path. It damn sucks. Period. In this case, the silence spoke way, way louder...excellent piece! Oh, nice to meet you! :)
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Michele Rossi
Date: 8/29/2013 9:06:00 PM
Thank, Drake. I am in hell, honestly, waiting for boyfriend to stop the silent treatment. I'm 53-- I'm thinking maybe alone is better...