The Endless Kiss of Love

her lips were like the petals of rose
the essence of her scent I drank
those eyes that chained my heart
in that moment the two became one
I saw the life that we would have
and how I would kiss those lips
into oblivion

date:4/11/22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Alex Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 1:48 AM
"eyes that chained my heart" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Groen Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 8:33 AM
Thank you, Chris, sometimes just one line can make the poem... or just one reader!
Gauthier Avatar
April 13, 2022 at 1:50 PM
Well penned, Meru ~ congrats on your win.
Groen Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 8:34 AM
Thank you, Line, I don't think I would have made it here for six years, without your kind comments.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 11, 2022 at 11:35 AM
Hello Meru Groen, This sounds like a true love to me. Blessings my friend.
Groen Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 8:37 AM
It sounds like there is a reason you would know, good luck Darlene, and thanks.
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