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The End of the World

From the ashes of the fallen The new will arise, Into a world of white. As they begin to open their eyes They are already blind. Blinded by the colors That the fallen left behind. Red, brown, and black Fill the world That once was vivid and bright. Destined to follow the paths already made, The new fall behind. Nothing but ashes In a world of white.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/14/2016 12:55:00 PM
brittany atwater, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:46:00 PM
Brittan, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/20/2011 9:43:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Brittany. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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