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The End of Summer

High ear-wrenching buzz Palm slap on a sweaty neck The last mosquito

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/4/2010 12:39:00 PM
ah, another good write dear will! your pen is a mastery to behold. well written, may many more come to you always! --Madison
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Date: 9/9/2010 7:40:00 PM
Well conceived thoughts for the end of the summer, William
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Date: 9/9/2010 2:40:00 PM
Wonderful visual Will... sorry to see Summer end..mosquitoes and all..luv... enjoyed your creativity tonight..with luv..
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Date: 9/9/2010 1:59:00 PM
Gosh, glad you splattered that last mosquito. I can't stan them little su*kers. Glad summer is over and so are they. Enjoyed your poem..LeeAnn
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Date: 9/9/2010 12:44:00 PM
Will I be glad to see them go! Welcome back, Bill. Haven't seen you here in a while. Enjoyed your haiku very much! The "skeeters" will be out in FL until at least November. And I hate that "buzz." Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/9/2010 12:09:00 PM
A great Haiku, I really enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 9/9/2010 11:48:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your impressive poetry today William. Have not read for almost a week now. I had a wonderful vacation. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2010 11:42:00 AM
I hope that you got that sucker..I do not like mosquitoes...May they all be gone and stay away..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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