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The End of Death

The end of death As delusional humans Rots into eternity As they don't get too realize Their beliefs were wrong As the wondering Takes their last breath Filled with fear And uncertainty As the intelligent and stubborn Sees flashing light As they start to wonder And regret their choices They died without Reaching their full potential Because the only one who do Are the ones Who fear death From the very start

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/4/2009 12:40:00 PM
Thanks for all the nice comments. I am still immature, so is my English, as it's not my motherlanguage. I'm actually fifteen years old and Norwegian is my motherlanguage. I hope that I will improve my poems as I gain more life experience. Sincerly, Tommy.
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Date: 11/4/2009 8:01:00 AM
An interesting point of view! Good poem. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/3/2009 6:32:00 AM
Pretty good poetry. All the best.
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Date: 11/3/2009 3:42:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tommy. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2009 3:04:00 PM
funny actually, Bill Gates must be scared pooless.
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Date: 11/2/2009 3:04:00 PM
good poem, thanks for your thoughts
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Book: Shattered Sighs