The End of Death

The end of death

As delusional humans
Rots into eternity 
As they don't get too realize
Their beliefs were wrong

As the wondering
Takes their last breath
Filled with fear
And uncertainty

As the intelligent and stubborn
Sees flashing light
As they start to wonder
And regret their choices

They died without
Reaching their full potential
Because the only one who do
Are the ones
Who fear death
From the very start
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 4, 2009 at 12:40 PM
Thanks for all the nice comments. I am still immature, so is my English, as it's not my motherlanguage. I'm actually fifteen years old and Norwegian is my motherlanguage. I hope that I will improve my poems as I gain more life experience. Sincerly, Tommy.
Freeman Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 8:01 AM
An interesting point of view! Good poem. Sincerely, Moses
Shahwan Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 6:32 AM
Pretty good poetry. All the best.
Brown Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 3:42 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tommy. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Arteaga Avatar
November 2, 2009 at 3:04 PM
good poem, thanks for your thoughts
Culverhouse Avatar
November 2, 2009 at 3:04 PM
funny actually, Bill Gates must be scared pooless.
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