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The end of darkness

Some more steps, some more days, to the end of darkness, I presume? A savage world, a desperate soul, some more sand, some more rain, mirages we follow, shadows we search, some more steps, some more days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/27/2013 10:38:00 AM
Very deep & insightful write bidhu...a sad truth, I so feel at times thankyou 4 sharing..congrats, on your win....many can relatex Cherie
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/28/2013 7:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Cherie.
Date: 6/25/2013 2:07:00 PM
Makes you think! Congrats on your win, Bidhu! Love, Kim
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/28/2013 7:25:00 AM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 6/25/2013 11:22:00 AM
Very nice poem here Bidhu.Congrats on the win.
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/28/2013 7:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Kash.
Date: 6/25/2013 10:14:00 AM
Cryptically captivating and worthy of your win.... Jake
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/28/2013 7:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Sir.
Date: 6/25/2013 6:56:00 AM
Bihu congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/28/2013 7:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie.
Date: 6/24/2013 11:32:00 PM
I can imagine the end like this! congrats for your win.
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/25/2013 2:08:00 AM
Than you so much Andrea.
Date: 6/23/2013 8:17:00 PM
It's beautiful.Love the way you select your words to build up effect :)
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/24/2013 9:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Shiraz.
Date: 6/23/2013 8:41:00 AM
very nice poem,enjoyed it.
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/24/2013 9:40:00 AM
Thank you so much Kenisha.