Bidhu Patnaik Poet Blank verse

The End of Darkness

Some more steps, some more days,
to the end of darkness, I presume?
A savage world, 
a desperate soul,
some more sand,
some more rain,
mirages we follow, shadows we search,
some more steps, some more days.

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Cherie Thomas June 27, 2013 at 10:38 AM Very deep & insightful write bidhu...a sad truth, I so feel at times thankyou 4 sharing..congrats, on your win....many can relatex Cherie Bidhu Patnaik June 28, 2013 at 7:26 AM Thank you so much Cherie.

Kim Merryman June 25, 2013 at 2:07 PM Makes you think! Congrats on your win, Bidhu! Love, Kim Bidhu Patnaik June 28, 2013 at 7:25 AM Thank you Kim.

Kash Poet June 25, 2013 at 11:22 AM Very nice poem here Bidhu.Congrats on the win. Bidhu Patnaik June 28, 2013 at 7:25 AM Thank you so much Kash.

John Posey June 25, 2013 at 10:14 AM Cryptically captivating and worthy of your win.... Jake Bidhu Patnaik June 28, 2013 at 7:24 AM Thank you so much Sir.

Connie Gildersleeve June 25, 2013 at 6:56 AM Bihu congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie Bidhu Patnaik June 28, 2013 at 7:24 AM Thank you so much Connie.

Andrea Dietrich June 24, 2013 at 11:32 PM I can imagine the end like this! congrats for your win. Bidhu Patnaik June 25, 2013 at 2:08 AM Than you so much Andrea.

Shiraz Iqbal June 23, 2013 at 8:17 PM It's beautiful.Love the way you select your words to build up effect :) Bidhu Patnaik June 24, 2013 at 9:39 AM Thank you so much Shiraz.

Kenisha Shines June 23, 2013 at 8:41 AM very nice poem,enjoyed it. Bidhu Patnaik June 24, 2013 at 9:40 AM Thank you so much Kenisha.