The End Is Naught

The lights flicker on and off
The end of the world was naught
There was a time of love
But then it disappeared
Because all wished for an end that was near
Dear one, would you ever listen to me?
I used to cry all night
Thinking that you wouldn't
Do you see the misery?
Do you see the tears spring from my heart?
Do you understand the words that I utter?
Haven’t you heard the world is naught?
It feels like everyone around me has lost the battle
Because there was no side to take this time
Everyone fell into temptation
And all humiliation was brought upon the Griffin’s claw
A state of bewilderment filled the air
And all we ever heard were words
 That would never sink in
And that’s when sin crawled in
Nevertheless we watched it crawl and creep
Like a snake twisting and turning on the hills
He was under and over all of us
Everywhere we felt the pangs of depression
Because somehow the words coming through
Could not heal what the snake had burrowed
The people gathered together
Trying to figure out all that had happened
Somehow they all knew what was to come
Soon they would figure out what lies ahead
And what lies ahead is forever known by One
The disdain reigned upon the earth
Never to be seen by those of mirth
And we all wait
We keep waiting 
And my heart and body is shaking
The world is coming to an end
Its quaking
Its over its over
Tonight we must fight for our rights
But the rights are not clear
And they sear
Hope is out of sight 
Everyone is gathering up fear
That’s all we ever did
When we came together
The fear accumulating in frail weather
We tore us all down
And one by one
All smiles turned into a frown
We were wearing the death crown
And everyone around us looking our way 
Directed us down
And the words sprung into light
Dandelions fly above our heads
No one catches this knowledge 

We’re on edge
Always up, never down

--Another collab with my brother David. : )
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 6/24/2014 4:11:00 PM
Continued...typo alert LOL...I also esteem the line, " We were wearing the death crown..." nice work! J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/27/2014 7:15:00 PM
So sweet Justin, thank you so much my friend...always, Laura
Date: 6/24/2014 4:07:00 PM
I absolutely love the Apocolyptic tone in this mesmerizing collaboration Laura. More so, this fascinating composition impells me to evaluate myself, to address the maming and meaning of petsonal conflict, crisis, and conquest of doubt in the perfection of love and life. This is a struggle we all must realize and either succumb to or prevail with the grace of Providence. This poem is an impetus to us all, wake up and win your battles of the Self! The Right to to fight for Light! J.A.B.
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