The End

It all ended there,
Inside the deepest, darkest valley in my heart
Where sorrow found me, and pain adopted me
Where anger consumed me, and hatred filled my veins

Inside the deepest, darkest valley in my heart
A place no one dared dream of,
Where anger consumed me, and hatred filled my veins
Where every ray of hope was eaten by agony

A place no one dared dream of,
Deep, dark, and silent
Where every ray of hope was eaten by agony
Everything drenched by depression

Deep, dark, and silent
Panic-stricken, soul demented
Everything drenched by depression
Endless suffocation of paranoia 

Panic-stricken, soul demented
Where sorrow found me, and pain adopted me
Endless suffocation of paranoia
It all ended there,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/31/2013 6:13:00 AM
i know this poetry form but cant recall its name, this is very strong deep, such turmoil and suffering within your words, my friend, such imagery of torment and suffering,, well done, great write, blessings to you, sueellen
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Date: 7/26/2013 2:05:00 PM
Wow, you take us to such a deep dark place -I think I may need a night light after this one...but I like it very good!!! LOL! MC
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Date: 7/20/2013 7:14:00 AM
Emotional pain is a great energy absorber..Interesting lines penned..Sara
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Date: 7/19/2013 10:17:00 AM
I know this place all too well. Yet, I wonder if this pain were to be harnessed into some sort of inspired awakening, would it really be the end? Or a new start? Excellent piece!
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Date: 7/19/2013 7:24:00 PM
Thank you, dear reader :)
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