The End

the days go dark i sit in this park its lonly and cold but these feelings are old iv seen it before shes out the door i slit my wrists and my blood slowly twists down my arm and off my hand my life is fading and its so sweetly bland i bleed for you but you never knew the slow downfall of my life and all its miserable,sad and funny to how much i really care for you its ok now my life is fading but no one knows i only evading the sadness of losing and heartbreak, blood oozing the white light draws near its almost over from here i love you my dear you touched my heart now its time i fell apart its me not you see the picture i drew thats my blood my note of suicide im sorry im not ok im the one who lied its over my life has finaly reached its ending sleep well my love enjoy this last text im sending

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2013 10:33:00 PM

Austin "Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda: many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems. I Hope you find what you are looking for when it comes to poetry inspiration. I would love to offer any poem you recommend positive feedback. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"

Skat A

Date: 4/26/2013 7:58:00 PM

Austin, ;-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"

Kim Van Breda

Date: 4/26/2013 2:03:00 AM

Hi Austin.. While reading this very emotive piece I was aware that even if you may have written this in the third person (I hope)--these are still indicative of words you have thought. You write very well.. talented stuff, so keep posting and remind yourself of this..I think all of us 'word artists' have issues-- that is what makes us write well :)