The Encirclement of the Sphere

How many of us have wailed at the walls of our own desperation?
Hoping to know that place we’ve yet to find?
Yet how many have been left to drift endlessly like a dreamer at large?
And in the stars of night do they carry a message of hope;
Passing through the reflections of light already passed?
I myself ride upon this barge of persistence;
Traveling through time ever so slowly believing somewhere, somehow;
The truth will have been worth the waiting, for there must be more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mac Donald Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 3:11 PM
I wish for you 'more', Leonard. Through your thoughts and "persistence", I'm certain the 'barge' will take you where you need to go. A profound write...somehow I'm not surprised, for you have great depth. Best wishes! Mikki
Taormina Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 1:37 PM
More's better right Michelle.:) Depth; well thank you so very much but there's some who might interpet that discription of my thoughts more a bottomnless black hole one might fall in (smile) just my twisted humor don't take offence
Taormina Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 1:20 PM
What can I say Michelle your comments on my writing's leave me somewhat at a lose for words but I love them even though I try hard to hide the inside me, silly isn't it?
A   Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 8:47 PM
Leo, thanks for this clever poem... how are you... and yes the truth is in the perception we can't see... enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
Taormina Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 1:13 PM
Clever; I like that. i'm okay and thanks for asking and yes it is indeed in the perception.
Zzzzz Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 4:59 AM
Interesting thoughts put into words.
Taormina Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 1:10 PM
Thanks for your comments robert.
Mclaughlin Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 4:22 AM
Very good use of words IMO. Lovely images.
Taormina Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 1:08 PM
I agree with your opinion.:} thank you Madeleine.
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