The Enchanted Land

My sweet garden,the heaven
The land of vibrant colours .
The world of species of flowers seven
My home of florid bowers.

The elegant roses, red and white
Spread out their lovely fans.
The jasmines fair and white,
Like the clouds in the skies.

The hibiscus glorious and great
With their brilliant shade.
And I think it's all my fate
To enjoy what nature made.

The violets jaunty as always
Scattered their splendid petals.
And now the perky lilacs
Danced in the sweet breezes.

My beloved flower, the daisy
Kept their body ajar.
The primrose in their ornate style
Looked at me and indeed smiled.

The tender butterflies all set
Came to enjoy the sweet sips.
My garden the galaxy of flowers
The land of marvellous thoughts !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 11/15/2012 9:15:00 PM
Welcome, Premanand! There are remarkable images and symbols that make this poem an excellent pool of discovery and this sort of beauties strengthen more than a logical climax for which this piece is able to delivery. Sublime!
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Date: 11/14/2012 10:31:00 PM
enjoyed your vivid description of the garden.have a good day.
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Date: 11/9/2012 11:41:00 AM
I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Rohith. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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