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The Enchanted Land

My sweet garden,the heaven The land of vibrant colours . The world of species of flowers seven My home of florid bowers. The elegant roses, red and white Spread out their lovely fans. The jasmines fair and white, Like the clouds in the skies. The hibiscus glorious and great With their brilliant shade. And I think it's all my fate To enjoy what nature made. The violets jaunty as always Scattered their splendid petals. And now the perky lilacs Danced in the sweet breezes. My beloved flower, the daisy Kept their body ajar. The primrose in their ornate style Looked at me and indeed smiled. The tender butterflies all set Came to enjoy the sweet sips. My garden the galaxy of flowers The land of marvellous thoughts !

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Date: 11/15/2012 9:15:00 PM
Welcome, Premanand! There are remarkable images and symbols that make this poem an excellent pool of discovery and this sort of beauties strengthen more than a logical climax for which this piece is able to delivery. Sublime!
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Date: 11/14/2012 10:31:00 PM
enjoyed your vivid description of the garden.have a good day.
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Date: 11/9/2012 11:41:00 AM
I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Rohith. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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