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The Enchanted Dream

How sweet the soothing songs of May Reposed upon the fragrant breeze The comely songs were Seagulls play On the lulling trembling seas. That dissolved the traces of your feet That lingered in the distant sands While the sultry beams unite to meet The carnal rosebuds of your hands. That blush in light the morning spray Descending warmly in your eyes Who knew the light of love this day Would lift me up to a new sunrise. Yet in the sunless fleeting hour I would hold you in my smile Or steal a kiss from you my flower In this languid scented isle. That quivers in the blue distance When tender birds are fast asleep When blazing stars of night entrance The lonely fountains glistening deep. I would hear your whispers by the sea On the soothing waves of night Its mellowed voice would comfort me When the winds would take to flight. To the starry distance and empty spaces That holds the night sky of your hair On hallowed streets and sleepless faces It blows the Eastern dews most fair. And on the enchanted blossom rare That I'd finally pluck in spring To bow and give to you my dear With this golden diamond ring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/18/2013 12:47:00 AM
Awesome, Awesome, Awesome ;}
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Date: 9/25/2013 7:29:00 AM
Came by to say hello and see if you posted any new poems.
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Date: 9/23/2013 10:58:00 AM
HOWS THINGS MY FRIEND AWAITING ON THREE CS ENJOYED HOPE THING ARE GOING WELL FOR YOU HAVE A WONERFUL DAY
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Date: 9/23/2013 6:48:00 AM
An enchanting beautiful poem. It shimmers with a surreal quality. Reading it was a nice start to my day. Thank you for visiting my poetry.
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Date: 9/21/2013 12:03:00 PM
how sentimental can this get... a charming piece that enthralls, mus... love it..:) huggs
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Date: 9/21/2013 8:22:00 AM
Good morning Mustapha
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Date: 9/19/2013 6:32:00 PM
The title instantly drew me in!! I absolutely love this piece you have penned, very well done! Hugs. :)
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Date: 9/18/2013 1:31:00 PM
radinat is the word, mus... this piece glows with such tenderness; how beautiful!..:) hugggs
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Date: 9/18/2013 1:30:00 PM
Mustapha the words are just gorgeous,,, and I like the form of this poem....ty4sharing your poems make my day:0)
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Date: 9/17/2013 6:03:00 PM
THE DUCK AINT HAPPY YOU PUT GUN POWDER IN HIS FACE HA HA HA
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Date: 9/17/2013 5:19:00 PM
A romantic masterpiece. The shape of the poem is very womanly as well.
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Date: 9/17/2013 1:19:00 AM
These are such beautiful words and images, Mustapha! I loved reading it! Thanks for all of the nice comments on my poems, too! Molly
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Date: 9/16/2013 10:36:00 PM
This is such a delightful flowing love song. You are so talented. A joy to read. Best, SuZ
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Date: 9/16/2013 7:11:00 PM
I can't imagine how such lovely lines seem to come so free and easy for your pen......you are quite a gifted poet.......another lovely example here!
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Date: 9/16/2013 5:31:00 PM
LOOKING FOR PORK CHOPS MY FRIEND HE IS GONE MISSING HA HA HA
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Date: 9/16/2013 5:04:00 PM
Beautiful flow to your words and your rhymes were amazing, as always! I loved this poem! Nice visuals in this poem, as well! Excellent work!...Thank you for all of the kind comments. They are much appreciated!
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Date: 9/16/2013 12:20:00 PM
I agree with everyone else: quite beautiful; well-written and well-expressed. Kudos! Enjoyed this piece very much :)
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Date: 9/16/2013 12:12:00 PM
Wow, such eloquence!! Beautiful poetry, my friend. Licia :-)
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Date: 9/16/2013 11:34:00 AM
Well composed passionate work..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara
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Date: 9/16/2013 10:48:00 AM
wow!! a brilliant poem of yours friend Mustapha, I like nature and you wrote it creatively. I like it..can I have it as one of my favorite? thanks for sharing it..have a nice day. Maria :)
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Date: 9/16/2013 8:37:00 AM
thank you sharing your enchanted dream, will and spirit. M & M...love ti... A sweet soothing sound it is and was. beauty in every line... always~ Linda
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Date: 9/16/2013 8:31:00 AM
...the soothing waves of night... love the flair
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 9/23/2013 6:05:00 AM
Thank you for that kind review Gerald.
Date: 9/16/2013 7:08:00 AM
may the day smile beautiful on you my friend as this piece glows
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 9/23/2013 6:05:00 AM
Thank you my dear old pal. So much appreciated!
Date: 9/16/2013 7:07:00 AM
Mr MMPnUno, why nice to read from you again, this is an absolutely enchanting piece. And I should correct you for you have not told me you were here I have been here for a few years now my friend LOL. Sent you a message on FB. Good to see you , always your friend Jesse
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 9/23/2013 5:50:00 AM
Oh well my bad...: ) . I thought you saw the link below my poem page on CS my friend. Oh well Skywalker another one of those mind episodes lol. Thanks for your lovely review the great Jesse James. It means a lot.
Date: 9/16/2013 12:48:00 AM
Beautiful expressions on the theme of romance, Mustapha
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 9/20/2013 2:30:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram for your kind review. Your reviews are always appreciated.
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