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the empty swing

the empty swing still moving to and fro... cry of a child © kash poet ===============

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/26/2011 4:17:00 PM
EXCELLENT haiku! It reveals how much you understand the haiku.
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Date: 11/23/2011 5:12:00 PM
hey, Kash, was hoping to see a new one here today. HOpe you get inspired, my friend! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/22/2011 6:11:00 PM
It happened to me, I fell off and got banged on the head! So... this has a special memory for me. You are getting really good with haiky Kashi, keep up the good work! Lizzy
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Date: 11/22/2011 1:18:00 PM
Very touching, Kash. Your poem leaves the reader wondering what happed to the child. Thanks so much for your comments and friendship. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/22/2011 11:38:00 AM
Very expressive work..I could just see and hear the scene..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 11/22/2011 8:00:00 AM
Like this! We tumble, react and the world continues on, doesn't it? ;-) Sad, strong image. Cheers, Cyndi
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Date: 11/22/2011 5:35:00 AM
keeps the imagination going, Kash. Nice job of it
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Date: 11/22/2011 1:46:00 AM
Kash very nice , good imagery..David
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Date: 11/22/2011 12:33:00 AM
oh, about the poems I wrote on that December day when the poetry was flowing. . . . I found some of them in my files today. I don't think they were ones that ever got posted at soup. I have over a thousand that never have been posted here. (meaning not among my very best!) I actually have some I consider some of my best also that i've never posted here. Maybe one day!
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Date: 11/22/2011 12:31:00 AM
Kash, you are just wonderful at haiku. What a fast learner you are from being at the haiku site! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/21/2011 11:35:00 PM
crying children STRESS ME OUT but your haiku is lovely. Someone forgot to fasten her safety belt. :( U r great at these haikus, Kash.
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Date: 11/21/2011 8:58:00 PM
lovely picture painted!!
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