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The Empty Swing

the empty swing
still moving to and fro...
cry of a child




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Connie Marcum Wong

November 26, 2011 at 4:17 PM

EXCELLENT haiku! It reveals how much you understand the haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

November 23, 2011 at 5:12 PM

hey, Kash, was hoping to see a new one here today. HOpe you get inspired, my friend! Luv, Andrea

Elizabeth Wesley

November 22, 2011 at 6:11 PM

It happened to me, I fell off and got banged on the head! So... this has a special memory for me. You are getting really good with haiky Kashi, keep up the good work! Lizzy

Carolyn Devonshire

November 22, 2011 at 1:18 PM

Very touching, Kash. Your poem leaves the reader wondering what happed to the child. Thanks so much for your comments and friendship. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

November 22, 2011 at 11:38 AM

Very expressive work..I could just see and hear the scene..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Cyndi Macmillan

November 22, 2011 at 8:00 AM

Like this! We tumble, react and the world continues on, doesn't it? ;-) Sad, strong image. Cheers, Cyndi

Robert A. Dufresne

November 22, 2011 at 5:35 AM

keeps the imagination going, Kash. Nice job of it

David Williams

November 22, 2011 at 1:46 AM

Kash very nice , good imagery..David

Andrea Dietrich

November 22, 2011 at 12:33 AM

oh, about the poems I wrote on that December day when the poetry was flowing. . . . I found some of them in my files today. I don't think they were ones that ever got posted at soup. I have over a thousand that never have been posted here. (meaning not among my very best!) I actually have some I consider some of my best also that i've never posted here. Maybe one day!