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The Empty Stroller

This stroller that I have pushed with my babies tucked inside, Has now become vacant their mother causing us to divide. The seasons have come and gone and for reasons to her are known. My stroller still remains empty and my children have now grown. This stroller that I speak of is what others call their heart And it shall continue to remain empty as long as we're apart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/22/2016 11:10:00 PM
WOW, SUCH A DEEP WRITE...SKAT
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Date: 2/27/2016 12:50:00 AM
Hi Edward, it was nice reading your reply on the bottom. hope to see you around. LINDA
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Date: 2/19/2011 7:10:00 AM
This is a sad poem but so beautifully written~~ I am sending you a soup mail~~
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Date: 2/5/2011 1:36:00 PM
Sad. But I love the last part best, it flows wonderfully. I give it a seven. Take care. Dana'lynn
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Date: 7/28/2010 9:59:00 AM
Very sad to have feelings like that, Still the bright side goes to the health of their growth.. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Edward Hill
Date: 2/26/2016 7:56:00 PM
Thank you for your valued comments...It has been a while since I have been on poetrysoup. However, I am back and ready for some new writes....

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