The Empty Chair

You’d have ordered coffee
I still have hot tea
On this table number char*
My chair bears finger nail marks 
for every date you forgot…

And when you came
with an apologetic bouquet
no hug, ear on the phone
eyes on the watch and 
fingers on the coffee mug.
Were you even there?

I have waited …
long enough to see 
the lone plastic rose wilt.
The checkered table cloth 
is now devoid of tears, and
I no more need to wear
Sun glasses indoors.


The tea too, 
doesn’t get cold any longer
despite the empty chair beside me.

*four in hindi/urdu.  


Afroze
Contest :"CAFE MUSINGS"
27/1/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/9/2014 7:16:00 PM
Nicely written Alfroze. Verlena
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Date: 2/11/2014 8:16:00 AM
Lovely write on the café musings and congrats on the win,
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Date: 2/11/2014 7:22:00 AM
congrats on fine win hug
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Date: 2/11/2014 6:53:00 AM
'no more need to wear Sun glasses indoors.' .. It really touched. Congrats on your fine win......
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Date: 2/10/2014 11:58:00 PM
Very emotional. No more tears, no more wasted afternoons met with disappointment...no more tea that's gone cold, untouched in the cup. You moved me. CTB
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Date: 2/8/2014 11:06:00 AM
thanks alfroze.. huggs!
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Date: 2/1/2014 5:32:00 PM
This is a deeply emotional write, and I could feel the sadness coming through in every line. This poem was very well expressed. Nicely done! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you very much for the kind congrats on my poem. :)
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Afroze Ali
Date: 2/2/2014 4:25:00 AM
Thank you Kelly, thanks for reading.
Date: 1/31/2014 6:22:00 AM
COLD TEA URGH if I WAS A WOMAN I'D HAVE DUMPED HIM JUST FOR THAT . LOVED THE POEM.
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Date: 1/31/2014 2:19:00 AM
I agree with Andrea..this is great..I like the line ' ear on the phone etc'. thnx for stopping by !!
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Date: 1/29/2014 10:00:00 PM
this is a great entry into her contest. I really like it!
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Afroze Ali
Date: 1/31/2014 1:04:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea, Your appreciation is always valued.
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