The Empty Chair

You’d have ordered coffee
I still have hot tea
On this table number char*
My chair bears finger nail marks 
for every date you forgot…

And when you came
with an apologetic bouquet
no hug, ear on the phone
eyes on the watch and 
fingers on the coffee mug.
Were you even there?

I have waited …
long enough to see 
the lone plastic rose wilt.
The checkered table cloth 
is now devoid of tears, and
I no more need to wear
Sun glasses indoors.


The tea too, 
doesn’t get cold any longer
despite the empty chair beside me.

*four in hindi/urdu.  


Afroze
Contest :"CAFE MUSINGS"
27/1/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Walker  Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 7:16 PM
Nicely written Alfroze. Verlena
Mehta Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 8:16 AM
Lovely write on the café musings and congrats on the win,
Hamilton Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 7:22 AM
congrats on fine win hug
Garg Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 6:53 AM
'no more need to wear Sun glasses indoors.' .. It really touched. Congrats on your fine win......
Britt Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 11:58 PM
Very emotional. No more tears, no more wasted afternoons met with disappointment...no more tea that's gone cold, untouched in the cup. You moved me. CTB
Onclaud Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 11:06 AM
thanks alfroze.. huggs!
Deschler Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 5:32 PM
This is a deeply emotional write, and I could feel the sadness coming through in every line. This poem was very well expressed. Nicely done! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you very much for the kind congrats on my poem. :)
Ali Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 4:25 AM
Thank you Kelly, thanks for reading.
Watson Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 6:22 AM
COLD TEA URGH if I WAS A WOMAN I'D HAVE DUMPED HIM JUST FOR THAT . LOVED THE POEM.
Nair Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 2:19 AM
I agree with Andrea..this is great..I like the line ' ear on the phone etc'. thnx for stopping by !!
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 10:00 PM
this is a great entry into her contest. I really like it!
Ali Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 1:04 AM
Thanks so much Andrea, Your appreciation is always valued.
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