The empty altar


I built an altar in the hollow of my chest,
And carved your name in bone where beating used to rest.
I light the candles with the fever of my plea,
But you are blind to every flame that burns alive in me.

You drink the water from the well I bled to fill,
And leave me parched and shivering upon a silent hill.
I am a ghost that haunts the edges of your sight,
A moth that turns to ash against your unregarding light.

I stitched my skin into a carpet for your feet,
And count the heavy bruises as a victory, bitter-sweet.
You take the warmth, the breath, the marrow from my spine,
And never once acknowledge that the sacrifice was mine.

So let me rot inside this beautiful decay,
A quiet shadow that you’ll never brush away.
I am the heavy earth you walk upon without a care,
Condemned to love a phantom who was never really there.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Agustin Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 4:34 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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September 1, 2026 at 10:08 PM
Myka, this is a beautifully heartbreaking piece. The visceral imagery—especially building an altar in the hollow of your chest and stitching your skin into a carpet—perfectly captures the agony of complete, unrequited devotion. I also loved the musicality of the rhyming couplets throughout; they create a driving, steady rhythm that makes the heavy emotional weight of the content even more impactful. A truly moving and powerful read!
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